I don't remember much about my life as a human, only a throbbing pain in my chest, where my heart would've been. Now I find myself in a world of magical talking ponies and in a cybernetic robotic body with a dangerous hidden program.
I must find a way to control this program and make new friends as requested by my mentor and monarch. But who would want to be friends with a drone with a powerful program and has no memories of her old life?
I know I wouldn't...
My Little Pony X Murder Drones crossover that takes place in the MLP universe.
Pony Design belongs to Equestria-Prevails.
Drone Design belong to @KlifordKosse.
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs to Laura Faust, DHX Studios and Hasbro.
Murder Drones belong to Liam Vickers and Glitch Productions.
Enjoy. ^_^
Interesting..very interesting, I may look forward to this, especially since our main protagonist just so happens to be in the form of my fav Murder Drones character.
I have to ask, did you put the Russian through Google translate or do you actually understand the Russian your writing?
No need to really answer, I'm just curious.
P.S. Great story so far! I hope that if the timeline changes drastically from the canon, I hope its for the better!
Hmm, I'm not familiar with Murder Drones, but the premise seems interesting and there are no spelling or grammar issues that I noticed. I'll probably need a few more chapters to make up my mind, but you have my interest. Let's see where this goes.
Oh nice another Murder Drones story this one is showing good promise looking forward to more chapters
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are you by chance interested to see the series? its on youtube by Glitch Productions
Как говорится по-русски: Упс, я должен был предсказать, что кто-то сможет выбраться из вентиляционной шахты, используя выброшенные зеркала в качестве лестницы.
As they say in Russian: Whoops, I should've predicted that someone could escape out of a ventilation shaft using discarded mirrors as stairs.
-Doll
nice can't wait for the next chapter but if you can try too keep the chapters long with at lest 3000 to 6000 word count k
It’s rare to find a self-insert fic from before the Mane Six’s time—and I am also a fan of Murder Drones. The fact Princess Celestia is familiar with a term like “android” certainly says a few things. Will have to read a few more chapters to see if this story pans out. Not a bad start so far.
—Cragadilian.
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The comics have her dimension-hopping in her youth, so...
With what I understand of the show (Murder Drones). Both the murder drones and the worker drones that have "Absolute Solver" need oil so they don't overheat and die. I am curious how that will play into things.
Two main points that interest me.
1) After this show of power, will the day/sunlight cause her to start to overheat? If so, then will stop using her powers out of fear? (Or to be a bit more angsty does being around Celestia cause her to overheat?)
2) Is Doll's diet actual oil? I know that even a feudal/ pre-industial Equestria should have oil in some form. Lanterns and machines do exist after all.
And so it begins...
... Again!
Well, you caught my attention.
So Doll got the full Solver treatment huh?
Nice, I look forward to what this will bring in the future.
Will oil be a part of her diet now?
I'm still a little curious if the day light will effect her at all.
Um... You forgot Earth Pony
That's not grammatically correct or sane Russian. Lemme help.
Таких как вы, лошадок, много?
There are more like you, little horses?
Мило, но не надо строить мне такие глазки.
Я согласна.
These phrases do not translate directly from English. ChatGPT would be better at it than average auto-translation, if you give it context.
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I'm using Google Translate for my Russian translations.
Dorothy as inspired by Big O?
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Given you're writing for a robot there is a level of Irony in that I just love.
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So it begins! Absolute Solver has been unleashed!
A new chapter, yay!
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yep i just can't wait for the next one to come but i do hope they will make the chapters a bit longer too lol
This works. It hits everything I was hoping it would before Doll left.
I have questions though. Will Ponyville still be a bit scared of Doll like they were with Zicora? Or with Doll showing up will they be a bit more welcoming to the Zebra?
Ponies who understand or will come to understand Doll, and why.
1) Pinkie ("oh, I just read the subtitles")
2) Granny Smith (doesn't understand the words, but understands the meaning behind them)
3) Big Mac (not only understands the words but can speak it too. Just cuz I think it would be funny)
4) Spike (call it a magic bond dragons have with their "imprint moms" that help them understand words easier, or have it be a instinctual part of dragons- something all Dragons know because it is their primal language)
Excellent work keep it up
This just keeps getting better and better!
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Good observations. Though more importantly, will the Solver take over her mind like Uzi?
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Maybe... Maybe not...
Depends on Doll's willpower and control.
I hope Doll meets Rainbow Dash next.
Who is the girl in the cover art?
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Her name is Doll.
She's from an CGI animated series on YouTube called Murder Drones, by Glitch Productions.
It's dark, but I enjoyed it.
Already she's been exposed to Pinkie Pie shenanigans! We're doomed!
Nice, I was partially right about Doll and her first interactions with Ponyville.
I have an interesting idea if you are up for it. Maybe Winter is the only time Doll is able to go outside when the sun is out. The cold of Winter should help with her overheating issue. (It might just be because of my own joy I have when I see people shudder when I tell them I go outside in shorts and a T-shirt when it is 32F) Or if it is still to warm for Doll maybe far in the future when the Crystal Kingdom comes back could be the time she could handle daylight.
This is still a fun story. I am wondering how you handle the up coming years be fore the 1000th Summer Sun Celebration.
Excellent work can’t wait to see what happens next
It's Pinkie Pie, don't question it.
I really do hope Doll can find a way to translate her speech!
Great job as always!
Excellent work Keep It up
I watched episode 7... MOTHERFU-
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You're telling me.
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Well the cold up north would help but Doll wouldn't be able to go into the Empire when the shield is active because the shield makes the city way to warm
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We'll have to wait and see when we get there.
It is a very interesting story. But, the plot is a bit too fast pace for me. And the continuity of some of the characters is off. For example Pinkie does not live in ponyville at this point in time, same goes for Rarity she doesn't own carousel boutique yet.
Bit of advice, don't Rush your story or people would not be interested in it.
If you want to know how to make your story more attention grabbing. Take for example, this story by: Wingnut
- MLP: FiM
- Adventure
A filly trying to escape from the Crystal Empire's takeover by Sombra gets lost in the north, eventually discovering a strange tribe of ponies.