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Zack Catcher


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In Crimson's Arrival, Fluttershy's tranquil life takes an unexpected turn when a changeling hatches in her cottage, imprinting her as its mother. Struggling to adapt, Fluttershy embarks on an unconventional journey of parenthood. As the nurturing bond grows, she discovers the changeling, named Crimson, possesses extraordinary abilities tied to his emotions. When a lightning storm unleashes chaos, Fluttershy finds Crimson's mere presence calming the tempest. Puzzled, she questions the connection between his emotions and nature. This heartwarming tale explores Fluttershy's transformation from a compassionate animal lover to an unexpected mother, showcasing the unique bond between them and unraveling mysteries of the changeling world.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 12 )

decent story but is a bit hard to read in parts though a proof reader can help.

You need someone to comb over this >.<

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thank you for the suggestion

Comment posted by Chuckboy39 deleted Sep 1st, 2023

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Thanks for the suggestion. I suppose it could help here and there.

So are the first chapters still being rewritten?

It appears there might be a few typos in your text. Here’s a revised version:

Miss something during editing?

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why do i away's forget to remove those

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