It had been nearly a decade since Cozy Glow was freed from the binds of her petrification. Still at large, and at the tail end of a visit to Kludgetown, she stumbles across a battered up filly who had just escaped some nasty creatures.
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So how is this not an AU? Putting aside there's no way that this is Luster's backstory, Cozy being freed just adds to it. Should be fun to watch though.
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Exactly.
Seems pretty good so far
Look like this Cozy is hiding something. When she talks about her bounty, she talks about the Bits offer from the Crystal Empire but does not mention Equestria. That means for some reason Crystal Empire wants her head more than Equestria. Cozy is also hates Flurry Heart, they might have some history with each other given that Cozy and Flurry Heart never meet in Cozy pre-stoned time
I'm sure that with time, Cozy will earn Luster's trust. After all, Luster has no one else to depend on, Glad to see Cozy to have several tricks up her hooves.
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I'm not sure if this count as AU, everything in here happened after the finale, and no event in the story so far does not match the show information.
Luster Dawn and Flurry Heart? we know nothing about them. Cozy Glow also didn't appear in the future so we also don't know her fate too
Interesting take on Luster here, and Cozy. I wonder who Cozy has connections with because she clearly does. I quite like this so far and would love to see more.
Well, Twilight is kind of a hypocrite
I wonder who gave it to her.
I feel like I know what Cozy was going to end her sentence with: "How will Discord handle that Fluttershy will die one day"?
Pretty damn funny that she implicated Flurry in having a crush on Cozy. The fandom is strong in this one.
At this point I do believe that Cozy has adopted Flurry. she even prepared a pamphlet for her, and that's not to talk to Luna!
What’s the violence tag for?
Quite an escape, I wonder if Georgia will be expanded upon?
Nice, cover the track.
I have a feeling when Cozy threatens them with petrification instead of death is because Cozy have been through this before and she think this is worse than death
Better do it quiet and fast before
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Mostly to be safe, I don't trust myself to gauge whether something is violent but I did describe Luster's injuries and a Kludgetown sweatshop...
I intend to keep it (mostly) lighthearted
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Added an AU tag. My reasoning was that they never showed Luster's parents or Cozy's fate afterwards, but the tag does aid with a general gist of what people are in for
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Makes more sense now.
Another great chapter! I really like how clever Cozy is here, somehow getting that artifact and preparing for any attacks be it from Crystal Empire troops or Discord. I'm really excited to see what comes next.
I wonder what those are. Maybe info on Luster?
Cozy really likes trolling Flurry, doesn't she? I wonder if Flurry here acts similarly to this.
I wonder if this is the griffon we see Luster go to at the s9 epilogue.
Cozy has the talent to earn the ire of alicorns from the looks of it, even new ones.
It didn't take long for Luster to be open to the idea of being Cozy's daughter. I wonder if this will lead to the ending where Twilight is mentoring Luster.
Yeah discord is definitely tracking them
Hope cozy successful gave luster a flexible morale. Fuck the princess for allowing slavery to exist on their backyard.
Another great chapter. Very interesting reason for Flurry to be so obsessed. She seems rather petty and immature to be honest. Luster was, as usual, adorable and I really like Cozy's depiction as a mom here. She certainly mellowed out, but has that villainous edge to her.
I'm surprised that hasn't gained any suspicion.
So the trio escaped together? I'm guessing Chrysalis is still out there somewhere, but she would never be found unless she reveals herself anyway. Shame about Tirek though.
Cold hooves? Makes me wonder what the actual plan was.
Quite fast acceptance from Luster. Then again, its not like she had any adults in her life being so nice to her.
Already super excited for the next chapter!
I wonder if Cozy's life in this small village will be the new status quo. I hope she and Luster isn't forced to leave too early. They need their rests. The interaction between Cozy and Luster after the fire was very cute. I wonder if Cozy will become genuine friends with Autumn later down the line. All in all, another great chapter.
I wonder where Cozy got the money to buy her things, including a cottage of all things.
And how anyone could allow it.
I wonder who that doctor is. Cozy seems to have a lot of connections, but I wonder if they are anyone we already know.
Nice to see that Cozy isn't all sunshine and rainbows. Sure, she mellowed out, but she still has that edge to her, and frankly, she deserves to be angry. Equestria was willing to essentially torture her as a filly, after all. Makes sense that she would be traumatized.
Of course the Princess of Love would not object to putting a child in Tartarus for the rest of her life.
Ooh, interesting. So Flurry did have the right idea. I wonder how it went wrong.
Its like their trying to make themselves look like hypocrites.
Constantly excited for new chapters of this story. It's quickly becoming one of my favorites. I can't wait for more!
Cozy and Luster making proper friends, even if the former wasn't planning on it. Hopefully they can make true friendship before Candence comes and ruins on their lifes.
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True, I always think this punishment is too harsh, feels like one of our torture in real life: The White torture .Only immortal like Discord can survive being in stoned without going insane. Cozy must have a strong mind to go for that long
Damn, they really are Global Police isn't it, looks like every land now under Equestria influence, something can happen across the globe and they still know
Discord, your "good intentions" is to make people suffer, even if your plan "works", you will throw away your villains like nothing
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Thanks! Also thanks for the other comments! Glad people are engaged. This chapter was a bit long but I wanted to get it out of the way because the next few are a 3-4 parter and might require a new tag!
Loving this story. It's just soooo unique, creative, and funny. I'm completely enamored with this fic! What can I say, I'm a sucker for golly stories.
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This Equestrian Secret Service is lagging behind quite a bit. Hopefully "she" will quicken the pace. ;) Can't wait when Cozy has a stand-off with them.
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But they don't know about a whole city with slave trade lol.
Hope is the doctor Cozy knows? I can't say I expected that, but with that Sombra revival thing Cozy was supposedly tried to do when she poisoned Flurry, it does make sense. I take Hope was the one who got cold hooves over it? Either way, its interesting to see them together. Let's hope nothing bad will happen while the two go hiking.
So Cozy can break the sound barrier? Does that mean she's a Rainbow Dash tier flyer? I can only imagine just how much she practiced to get that good.
So That's where she got the cloak from! Another character I did not expect. I wonder if Suri knows Cozy or if Cozy only appeared to her in a disguise. I wonder how well Hope knows her.
Considering where Hope is from, she would reasonably believe that.
As always, can't wait for more!
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Only the most talented doctor for Luster! I'll try to get another chapter out by this week, but next week will be less dry.
And the family has grown even bigger! Damn, hope is an amazing doctor.
Cross fingers that nothing happens to Lustie, and I noticed that the little filly only likes to be called that by her new Mother.
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The thing with Flurry is that we have literally nothing to go on with her personality when she's older from canon. You'd think with who her family is, Flurry would be less of a brat.
But apparently not.
Amazing work. Keep it up!
i hope what actually happened clears up next chapter
More Cozy past revealed!
I have a feeling that Flurry Heart wants to destroy the metro that Cozy built but can't do it because the crystal Ponies like it LMAO
Mailing Starlight the pass is unexpected but I get it, sometimes you need to make friends with the enemy so they will go easy on you
Sorry but Equestria likes putting their trophies in public for everyone to see it
What a cliffhanger! Cozy and Luster have some incredibly bad luck to suddenly have to deal with changelings. I wonder if Chrysalis sent those as they are unreformed. If so, what does she want with Cozy? Maybe they are messengers? Very keen to see where this goes.
Is Hope disguised as a changeling as well? Because earlier, she was sent to check on Luster and later she was with Cozy and fake Luster. Or did she find Luster on the way to the house and just pick her up? Because she would have noticed the changeling problem otherwise if she actually teleported back to check on Luster.
It seems that there is a full on villain team going on. I wonder if they have a unified plan or if their just purely doing their own thing while staying in touch.
I wonder if Cozy's right or if Flurry just holds a normal grudge. If it was a crush, I'm sure Cadence would notice it.
Cozy really needs to teach Luster some magic safety.
Is Hope also wanted in some way or is she just anxious around crowds?
So Sombra just let Cozy rule with him? That must have been an interesting reign. I do wonder what crazy plans she had that Sombra always vetoed. I also wonder how much that tram and metro ultimately modernized the Empire. If Cozy's telling the full truth here, she could actually be a good leader. Did Cozy capture Spike and use him to dragonmail that lifetime pass to Starlight? Does Starlight still actually use it?
Weird, was Hope in cahoots with the changelings? The only explanation for why she had a fake Luster with her. Not that fake Luster was fed since Cozy only had bitter feelings inside. With any luck real Luster held off the changeling long enough for Cozy to show. Still, a cliffhanger like this where Luster's life is in danger. Now I will be biting my nails until the next chapter.
Cozy didn't had any anti intruder system in place?
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Luster is her anti-intruder system and personal bodyguard she just needs practice
Yikes. First big fight Cozy has had with her new daughter. It had to happen eventually, but it hurts to watch either way.
At least Luster had her fun with her two new friends.
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Looks like Cozy's finally learning that raising a filly isn't all sunshine and rainbows. At least she didn't actually hurt Luster, although she did manage to prove to her why she was considered a scary supervillain. I also find it interesting that Chrysalis just let her essentially co-found a hive. Makes me think that she earned some respect from the queen.
Cozy was pretty scary here. Let's hope she won't keep that up for Luster's sake. I do like that though, it still shows that she's Cozy Glow and not some benevolent OC. No one ever tried reforming her in this universe, after all, so she has no reason to be 100% good.
Now I seriously wonder what letter Cozy would write to Twilight.
Do I even want to know what those toys were like?
Sad thing is, that this propaganda is based on truth.
I assume it was designed by Cozy at her worst? I shudder to think what she would have come up with at, what I assume, was at the time her at her most vengeful.
Man, changelings are shockingly easy to reform.
Well, at least she's trying.
Can't wait to see the meeting with Chrysalis! I wonder if she became less evil over time.
Why did luster so hellbended on friendship bullshit when she was abandoned by Equestria her whole life? Was their propaganda that potent?
I got the feeling that she was brainwashed, like a stockholm north korean.
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Hey, only took Thorax 2 minutes.
ARGH! This is such a feel-good story I can't take it
You can just tell that Cozy is in a bad mood. Still, she at least apologized, which is quite rare. And Luster will need to look at Chrysalis in the eye and either lie or tell the truth.
Nice description of the hive. Cozy might just be the most knowledgeable pony on changelings at this point. Can't wait to see how the meeting with Chryssie will go! Hopefully we will get a bit more backstory on the founding of this new hive.
The feats you describe to Cozy makes me think that she could very well join the Wonderbolts, even in a disguise if she really wanted to. Those Crystal Empire pegasai must have gotten some amazing training.
That is both oddly responsible and irresponsible advice. Shame just how right Cozy is about the princesses.
When did Cozy hear Luster say that? Did Cozy overhear Luster talking with the two changelings last chapter?
The way Cozy's described here, its almost like a very mean, but also kind of cool older sister. It does make me wonder just how old she was when they started the new hive.
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At the table in the Kirin chapter.
She'll never forget it. If there was a Santa equivalent for Harth's Warming it'll go:
Santa: "Have you been listening to Mommy this year?"
Luster: "Ha! I always keep my room tidy. I never say rude words. And I never play toss-the-fireball without asking my Mom first, and never near a forest."
Cozy: "Yeah, but she did call me chubby."
She won't mention anything else.
the fun part is no changelings ever call her back, only Starlight reaches out to her, Once. Her children just forget her
I wonder what going on in the "Captured Hive", do they have any method to reproduce? And why Thorax is Big?
Wasn't expecting that play from Chrysalis, to bring out Luster's protective instincts for her Mom. Even managing to Teleport for her young age. Becoming Twilight's next students is looking more than possible. But I'm confident she will stay true to her allegiances and not betray Cozy.
With the way Chrysalis described it, it's almost like Cozy could've just stayed as an alicorn, but chose not to because of the risks.
Another great chapter! Chrysalis was great. I like how she basically became a mom to Cozy while still being menacing. She does seem to genuinely love Cozy, which I guess makes sense given what they must have gone through to get her back on her feat after the petrification. I hope we'll get to see more of grandma Chryssie in the future.
Luster showed great magical talent here, which makes sense considering that she's good enough to become Twilight's student in the future.
I am curious though. How many of the general population know about Discord's role in that incident? I wouldn't be surprised if it was covered up.
Interesting. Did Twilight and her friends know that they were awake there or did they lie about it to the general populace?
Chrysalis seems to care less about Tirek and her own drones and more about Cozy. I wonder if that's her maternal instincts focusing down on Cozy in particular.
So Cozy was a bit of a celebrity back when she was a guard?
Aww, Cozy is a good friend.
Ouch. I sure hope this doesn't damper Cozy's confidence.