Chapter 1 Rewritten · 11:30am Feb 6th, 2024
Because of new readers from My Guardian Cozy, and because I said I would many months ago, I've rewritten chapter 1 of Dawn Adopted. Hopefully it's better, but at least it's objectively 2.5 times longer. 3,804 words vs 9,567. If there is a difference in prose fingers crossed the jump from chapter 1 and 2 isn't too unbearable. Next chapter of DA will be 3.5K words, but I feel like calling it part 1 of a 3 parter. All Luster. Too
I'm an absolute sucker for Cozy, so I really love Dawn Adopted. Hope you haven't given up on it.
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Nah don't apologise.
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Sorry for the inconvenience, I didn't read anything here for two months and I thought there would be dozens of new chapters in the stories I follow, some had, others not, and there are one or two that have gone on hiatus, I know writing takes time, sorry again
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Yeah, editing is just taking a while and I've been busy. I'll be dropping two chapters soon.
Are you still there?