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I don't get why there is so much dislikes, it's good fic! And it's not like it have some dirty fetish that majority of people not just dislike but outright hate.
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I'm a disliked person.
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Probably because it's non-con, that tends to get a bit of hate, and also pretty unimaginative. I mean her name is code and the chapter is geass. It's fine, no real errors that I saw, but neither lewd nor deep enough to really tickle the pickle.
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Obvious reference, therefore, means its unimaginative?
By that logic: all MLP function is unimaginative because it's based on MLP. It's not my intent to flame you or to say you're wrong. However, that point doesn't seem right.
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Writing within a universe implies you're using the setting and it's tropes, so most of it gets a pass on that. Making a mind control fic where the MC is called Code and controls people through eye contact and spoken orders, little heavy handed to be called anything else imo.
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So because it uses a concept to its own tropes means its heavy-handed? This could have been a standard mind-controlled fic where the power is generic and not much commented upon. I decided to reference a show I was using for the sake of changing it a bit. I think it's better to use a Geass for the sake of a wink rather than a regular mind control power requested in the outline.
I can see where you're coming from though.
This was really good! Code was the most wonderful kind of mind control protagonist, delightfully cocky (and cocky), I thoroughly enjoyed all the invincible playfulness. Would absolutely love to be her slave. Celestia flashing in and out of cognizance was very well done, and your indulgence of size difference was plenty enjoyable as well. Anyone picky about fan fiction mind control smut having a reference is kind of absurd - as if a chapter title is what the quality of a work is judged on?
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Thank you for the kind words—they've been few toward me as of late. I still need to read proper mind control fics for reference in doing them better. Could you suggest some by chance?
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I feel like you've got a pretty good handle on it - if anything, your spins are pretty fresh from not too precisely following tropes - but I definitely would love the opportunity to share some of my favorites. I'll try and DM you a list in the next day or so!
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Thank ya thank ya.
I like this, makes me wish I were more into futa, good on ya
Love it thanks for it!!! =)
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Anytime, broski
Can I hope you already have a sequel in progress?
I dont get it, her only ability is to command thru peoples eyes, and nobody just stands a bit away and shoots her
Just putting this out there: you put bugle instead of bulge.
Now I can’t stop seeing the hilarious image of her underwear bulging out comically in the shape of a bugle and Celestia nuzzling the instrument through the protective veil of underwear.
This has brought me to the conclusion that she is aroused by musical instruments.
But hey, that’s just a theory! A G-