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Hammerhead


Let's give this writing thing a go...

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It's time for the Royal Canterlot Gala, where the Royalty, the wealthy and their friends all party at the Canterlot Palace!
This time, Princess Twilight has invited both the Dragon Lord Ember and King Thorax, and each can bring one guest as well!

Ember and Thorax forcesconvinces Garble, a hotheaded dragon of the dragon lands, and Pharynx, the tough big brother of the Changelings, to be the plus ones.

How will either of them handle a social gathering as big as this one?

Entry for the May Pairing Contest 2020.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 25 )

Hi! Found this story and it's really funny. I like it! :twilightsmile:

Admittedly, sort of hoped for a bit more one-on-one interaction between Pharynx and Garble...but at the same time, it makes perfect sense them trying to pull things to annoy each other like this. :rainbowlaugh:

And it all still ended well for them, so... :twilightsmile:

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Admittedly, sort of hoped for a bit more one-on-one interaction between Pharynx and Garble...

I originally planned for them to talk a bit more, but I struggled on what they would talk about without it getting too deep into backstories. I thought in the end, they'd be more likely to try and one-up each other instead.

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What’s wrong with going into backstories?

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It's easy to end up going on a tangent if you go into ones that don't have a point relevant to the actual story.

Good stuff! What, exactly, is this type of comedy called? A comedy of errors?

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As in a comedy where everything goes wrong? Maybe...

Bad af longer comments chit good job. Was enjoyable from start to finish

I wouldn't classify Pharynx as dark green. :unsuresweetie: But other than that, this is a great story! Can't wait to see what happens next. :twilightsmile:

Awww. That's cute. :raritystarry:

Spindle is totally another version of Fluttershy. A little more bold though, considering she asked Pharynx to dance, something I bet Fluttershy would be too shy to do.

Excellent chapter! :raritywink:

Excellent story! Hoping you'll make a sequel. :twilightsmile:

The pair kept their eyes towards each other, whatever they did result in them having a good time, so ended up with a grin on their faces. Pharynx answered with “Nope”, and Garble answered with “Nothing at all.”

I DON’T KNOW WHY BUT I CRACKED UP AT THIS

Well, dang! That could have escalated terribly. :twilightoops:

And...it escalated. Oh, snap! :twilightoops: At least Garble got to have some fun before it did.

And now, things have de-escalated. Whew! What a relief! :rainbowlaugh:

Well then that could have gone better between pharynx and Grable lol but the night's still young I wonder how this will go

It looks like things are turn out pretty well for garble he even got invited to Poetry Club something like that I'm not really sure what you want to call it but of course things just got crazy I wonder what the heck is pharynx doing

Aww that was a cute chapter it's nice to see the soft side of pharynx and Spindle is not to shy with him and it's a good thing she helped him after his stunts he pulled lol

Ok wow this was a pretty good story to see how these two can interact with other ponies and with each other in the end they both look like they have fun awesome story man

Curious, he followed the sound of the humming, only to find it was coming from Pharynx. He was humming, stepping and bouncing in time to a tune, and he looked…happy, oblivious to who was watching him. It looked strange, but also a bit amusing, to see a changeling who was acting serious for most of the night looking so cheerful and quietly dancing to himself.

Oh wow that part I was not expecting that at all to see him so happy lol wow thats amazing

“Don’t know” he answered bluntly again. Pharynx was not a fan of the typical love-tasting question, and if Thorax were around, he would rather push them onto him instead. Although when he saw Spindle look disappointed once more, he could not help but feel bad. “I… rarely eat anything else apart from leaves. One of the younglings says it’s tastes like…”

Chocolate milk. I’m chuckling. Just imagine that reference.

Cool combo of characters! Pharynx's under-utilization in the show was criminal, and Garble's character got a lot less flat after Sweet and Smokey, so this was fun to read.

I definitely see one-upping as being how they interact. I wrote a story about Pharynx and Shining interacting, and it worked as a conversation, but there's no way Garble would care for a long-winded conversation.

Good job, Hammer! :twilightsmile:

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How is it that no matter what story I read… you always seem to have left a comment on it already? :rainbowlaugh:

Never seen this combo before. Nice story and definitely interesting…

Rly sad that this one was short, felt like there was a lot of potential there. Still, I love what you made out of it and I found it really funny. Nice job, well done.

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