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Let's give this writing thing a go...

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While waiting for Ocellus so they could spend the day around Canterlot, Smolder decides to kill some time by browsing one of Rarity's boutiques. Unfortunately for her, the boutique in Canterlot is run by a store manager who is very eager to find the right dress for the young orange dragon.

Written for the May Pairing Contest 2021.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 10 )

Those two love each other.

I could easily see this working out as an episode sometime in Season 8 or Season 9, well done. :twilightsmile:

congrats to be featured XD

Sweet slice of life story, love it! :pinkiehappy:

I'm not sure whether to congratulate Sassy Saddles for her forceful sales tactics, or be annoyed by Sassy's persistence in making the sale. I mean, if you've ever walked into a fairly posh store just to browse the cool products, you've all met a salesperson like Sassy who either refuses to let you leave without buying something, or makes you feel really bad about not buying anything. :ajbemused:

Also, Smolder has something to say about you calling her tsundere.
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This was actually really sweet! Good job!

Well this was a pretty nice story seeing how smolder really enjoys wearing dresses even though she didn't want to buy one but you know Sassy Saddles can be oblivious when somebody tried to explain to her but somehow it worked out pretty well she bought a dress for special occasion even though it's just a picnic this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

Smoulder dressing up will never not be cute. Delightful little story

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I'm not sure whether to...

Perhaps be amazed that Sassy found something that Smolder would actually want? That was no small feat.

Finally got around to reading this fic after putting it in my “read it later” list.

Honestly this was nice, I should have probably checked it sooner. Just a little interaction between 2 chapters for the fun of it, though there’s also quite a bit of potential. I wonder if Smolder would enjoy spending time in the boutique every time she visits Canterlot. It could become her favourite by starting a friendship with Sassy, plus the “ponyville vibe” of the place

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