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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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“And you're angry, and you should be, it's not fair,/Just 'cause you can't see it, doesn't mean it, isn't there.” -Linkin Park, ‘One More Light’

After receiving a letter from Griffonstone, Gallus is found by Sandbar lying in a field and staring up at the stars. Sandbar asks if he’s okay, but the griffon is defensive. What is it that’s bothering the Gallus?


Cover art commissioned from CaptShowtime.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

This was a very sweet, heartfelt little tale. :heart:

Wow thats pretty sad and grandpa gruff is dying that sad too I know Gallus does not have a good relationship with him but sometimes you just want to see him And hes been holding that a motion for a long time at least sandbar is there to help him To get through this This was a pretty nice story

An pretty good short story, definitely very deep and heartfelt. I have to fault that end in line though, it's just way too on-the-nose for what the reader is supposed to be feeling.

This was really sweet, nice work

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