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Closer-To-The-Sun


You gotta kick at the darkness until it bleeds daylight.

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"Lying in a field of glass,/Underneath the overpass,/Mangled in the shards of a mental frame,/Woken from a dream by my own name." -Death Cab For Cutie, 'Underneath The Sycamore'

Gallus sneaks out of the dorms into the night and is found by two of his friends, gazing up at the stars. To their surprise and confusion, he's been talking to his parents.

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That was beautiful, both heartfelt & awesome! :fluttercry::heart:

Thanks for sharing! :twilightsmile:

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Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I was honestly have doubts about how it came out, but I'm glad to see positive feedback!

Touching, and the fact that the grammar is mostly clean makes this story a pleasant read. It is a fundamental reminder that genuine friends stand with and for you throughout your life challenges, even though they may not be able to lend much help other than moral support, which may be pivotal in reality.

Awww, so sweet and heartfelt, I thought my heart was gonna break...:fluttershysad: :heart: but you did a wonderful job.

Awww That is the sweetest story I ever read nice job

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