At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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I'm not dead, I've been reading everyone's comments and taking their feedback to heart! In payment for ghosting everyone this past coupla months, have this Twiggy Aurora that WasntThereDoneNothing came up with yesterday!
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Awesome chapter
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Thank you
another solid chapter. Great job, Ellie!
Always love me a "Renewal Posts A Chapter Day"!
And this one was quite the whirlwind of emotions, wow! At least the gang's back together again, and can hopefully come up with a plan that's at least marginally better than Aurora's One-Mare Army approach to storming the not-so-preverbial castle...
I also didn't anticipate Julip and Roach getting quite that much of a "Relationship Upgrade". Must have been quite the trip after the valley!
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Haha, fun fact about Roach and Julip's relationship, I may have violently foreshadowed that development when I gave into impulse and wrote this side-story: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/486632/one-size-fits-most
Definitely a lot of movement in this chapter! I opted for brevity in a few places and spared the chapter an unnecessary scene of Aurora's flight back to the Stable with Fiona. My favorite gryphon is absolutely going to get her share of page time in the future but I couldn't bring myself to write out the long, uncomfortable flight when the main plot was in serious need of forward momentum. ;)
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Thank you! :D
Always glad to see more of this story and also happy to hear Roach and Julip's little side story is finally canon now. I've loved everything about your discord and hope he's not totally out of the story at this point too. Looking forward to more!
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*Writes a 30k word chapter*
"I opted for brevity..."
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Hehe, whoops
Thanks for writing!
Congratulations, you made me cry. Please write more? :)
Also love the little Roach x Julip side story, it was very good, glad its canon. You should write more like that as well
Good chapter tying up a few ends.
Shame my theories didn't hold water.
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You're welcome!
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Success! I was worried this chapter would be a little underwhelming prior to publishing, and a large part of it being due to having rewritten a few key scenes and overanalyzing what was already on paper. One of the joys of being the writer, I already know what's going to happen months in advance! XD
I keep coming back to the idea of writing another short with Julip and Roach as a sequel to One Size Fits Most, but if I did another I'd like it to factor a little more deeply into the main story's narrative somehow. Still working that out in my head alongside another project following the end of Renewal. We'll see which one wins out first!
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;) Glad you enjoyed it! I do enjoy reading everyone's predictions, especially when some of the ones you guys come up with could legitimately carry the story forward on their own merit. So far I only remember one being dead accurate earlier on in the story, and I think that's the only time I've pinged a reader in private to see if they would be kind enough to edit their own comment. XD
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Haha, I'd call that success, yes! It was good! The moment between Aurora and her father was very nice, made me tear up. The other reunions just added onto that! You are doing well! Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!
And you should! It was very good, I've love to see how their relationship blooms(or not)! I kinda was hoping we'd see Aurora get railed, or heck, one with Fiona, she's a pretty bird! I have some ideas haha!
You did well with this chapter, Elbow. I'm curious to see what happens next.
I feel sorry for the pour soul who has to clean that suit of power armor. A ghoul wearing it for that long would be bad enough, but to have it marinate in sexual musk and fluids for that long probably totaled it. Also, I think a certain pair probably has a new kink after that ordeal.
I'm curious to see what Tandy is going to do to Primrose when she falls asleep next. Chems are usually only effective for so long. That mental imagery with the Jet inhaler was great; I'd pay money to see a picture of that, just for the lulz.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww <33333333333333
This was so impactful; I could feel it even through the emotional blunting I've been suffering lately -- I'm saddened that I'm nearing the end of the book; but at the same time, it's a welcome relief as things come to a close. I really hope you decide to start writing the sequel soon, I really would love to be able to tag along the journey as its conjured up in your mind :)
This was such a wonderful, cathartic scene (I know I use that word a lot but man I can't think of any other way to describe it. It's deeply relieving and satisfying. You've done such a good.job at conveying these emotions in a way that we as readers can really feel <3333
I was listening to the piano rendition of "to zanarkand" during this scene and I had to reread it several times because it just hit so freaking good. It feels so good to see Aurora finally grieve and let it all go -- with so many in the stable bearing witness to how much she'd been through <3 this was so god damn sad, and yet so god dam relieving and good <3