At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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"came and went she decided"
"came and went and she decided"?
"Until now, she assumed her years"
"Until now, she'd assumed her years"?
"Her paused, her smile fading as her"
"She paused, her smile fading as her"?
"and quant farming communities"
"and quaint farming communities"?
"of highways, road, avenues and side streets"
"of highways, roads, avenues and side streets"?
"including those belonging to a stallion seated in the corner, a Wonderbolts"
"including a stallion seated in the corner with a Wonderbolts"?
"her eyes wide as sauces as she lifted"
"her eyes wide as saucers as she lifted"?
"Or as bright as it could be if her throat didn’t feel like"
"Or as bright as it could be with her throat feeling like"?
"She shot him an auspicious frown."
Did you mean a different word there? I'm not sure what the current phrasing means.
...That sure is an awfully big coincidence, the bomb that hit Fillydelphia just happening to land apparently directly on Stable-Tec HQ, isn't it?
"Rather shout her down like Delta was"
"Rather than shouting her down like Delta was"?
"“We’re on duty,” she warned her."
"“We’re on duty,” she warned him."?
"once when she was yearling"
"once when she was a yearling"?
And another good chapter; thanks for writing!
YUUUUUSSS :D
such a good chapter. really glad to find out what Fiona has been up to as well! glad to see Roach come out of his chitin more too! cant wait to see what theyre gonna find in there! a goul scoots? a tearful goodbye letter to rainbow dash? the possibilities are endless!
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Alright, corrections have been made! Thanks again for the eagle eye! :) Regarding a bomb being dropped square on the roof of Stable-Tec HQ, well... spoilers. ;)
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Yee, thank you! Didja really think we were done with the bird o' Blinder's Bluff? She's got some shenanigans to get up to yet, haha. I'm glad you liked the evolution of Roach's character, including the little bit of sass and excitement he shows here. I love him as a character and had to resist so many times not to rush the process. He's a good buggo. As for what's waiting below the crater of Stable-Tec HQ, who knows? Well, I know. But you don't!
Guess ya gotta wait!
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You're welcome again, and thanks. :)
"Regarding a bomb being dropped square on the roof of Stable-Tec HQ, well... spoilers. ;)"
Of course. :)
Golly, how unfortunate, though...
Oh I can't tell you how much am I waiting for each chapter, such a good story.
With two of my favorite Fics stuck in hiatus, its good to have an interesting story getting regular updates. I'm totally on board for wherever this is going, cant wait for the next chapter.
This is such a good story - always a new twist to take in : ). Now the question is how to get the attention of the vault - ask the rangers for help?
Also, the magic kill radiation is coming from the enclave and can be ended if they stop makeing clouds? Hmmm... I have thought for a while now that the enclave nuked equestrian on their own, now it seems obvious that they did and that they probably didn't have enough nukes left for the zebras. What do you want to bet the rest of the world has gone on without them for hundreds of years, and that the poison clouds are there to keep everyone out? Who would want to invade a dust bowl anyway? As long as the enclave can keep equestria worthless they have time to keep fighting their civil war : /
Wooo!!!! Loved this chapter!!!
And ehehehehe Fiona you scamp. I will gladly snuggle you forever!!!
And ooooh scootaloos got her own vault. Smart
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Fair enough, fair enough. Just so far seemed like she was a lesbian.
As said, I have nothing wrong with homosexuality, I just personally found it weird that FO:E stories tended to have lesbians as the MC. Nothing wrong with it, just wanted to know why.
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I couldn't tell you why, but it may be a conversation better suited for a forum post. :/
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I was mostly asking for this story in particular, which you answered. Sorry if I’ve offended.
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No worries!
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Oh, they both died? In the chapter where it’s mentioned, I read “Mr. Cake died”, not that they both died. Either I misread, or there is a goof. Either way I’d probably double-check the line and maybe make it clearer?
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It's probably a goof on my part. Mental note to myself, fix it! XD
Roach! Get out of the water! Oh no he can't hear us, he had Airpods in!
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*Roach jamming out to 16 Tons as he excavates the crater*
I believe Julip is a corporal, no?
Man after 30 chapters of leadup, experiencing this exact moment is indescribable. Wow.
Wouldn't that be because he's a ghoul?
One of the most horrifying parts of the novel psychologically. Normalcy and the expectation of day-to-day life are immediately upturned by impending armageddon.