At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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Thank you! I'm happy this has sparked some renewed love for the genre for you! <3
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From what I know about Fiona, she's seeing a lot of ponies right now. ;)
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Nonsense, there's an entire chapter for you to read still! Glad you're enjoying the story!
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Bad news, you've got homework this week. :)
How many chapters long will this story be?
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I'd say at the pace I'm putting things together, plan for 45
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YAY! another happy chapter :D
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oh boy oh BOY :D
Uh oh...
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Double uh ohs
Aw yeah, things are starting to heat up
"I had no idea J.K. Yearling dabbled in erotica."
Is the name change deliberate?
"instead and one the apples from"
"instead and one of the apples from"?
"the changeling’s face before he recognition dawned"
"the changeling’s face before recognition dawned"?
"And they still do."
...Do what? I seem to be having a parsing failure here, sorry.
...Was this meant to refer to the Enclave being on edge? "still are"?
I continue to enjoy this story; thank you for writing. :)
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Ooh, good eye! Corrections have been made, thank you! The only one I'm not sure on is the J. K. Yearling question. Did I get the name from the show wrong? ><
Also the last one, yeah that needed a bit of rework. "They still are" is more correct in terms of them still worrying about the Rangers installing an AA system near New Canterlot. I went over it and smoothed out the bump. :)
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Well naturally I've never seen this before and it's *purely* coincidental ;)
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Thanks. :)
Oh, yes, if you meant to use the one from the show, that's A.K. Yearling.
[checks]
Ah, yes, that seems to work; thanks. :)
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Why, how very strange; also surely by complete coincidence, I thought of exactly the same thing when I reached that point in the chapter. :D
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Fixed! :3
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It would have been a bit of a curious p.o.d., if a change of one letter in her initials had been what led to this future. :D
Hmm...energy source? Weapon? Por que no los dos?
As a guy, every mention of gelding makes me instinctively tightly close my legs. It fits where you choose to use it in your story though. It was one element that always seemed missing from other post-apocalyptic Equestria stories that include slaves. Well done on using that element; it adds depth to the overall feeling and tone of the story.
I'm also really digging your take on the Enclave here. They kind of remind me of the Brotherhood of Nod from Command and Conquer with the advanced technology and twisted religious zealotry thing going on.
One of Gingers best memories is meeting Aurora I swear Deep, if you do anything to these two I will be inconsolable for HOURS
So hang on...I loved this chapter, totally and completely. Who is apogee? This name keeps getting popped around.
I get that shes the daughter of jet set and delta vee, but is she Canon? Or an oc?
Also apparently she um...has a very DEEP, very questionable... connection with her dad? If applejacks words are to go by...
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A nuclear reactor is just a reactor until someone jams a cork in it!
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Haha yeah, to be purely transparent the very first scene between Ginger and Cider where she threatens to geld him was a spontaneous idea that luckily fit well with her background as the daughter of a prominent slaveholding family. I lucked out, but it really does tie it all together nicely. ;)
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*plans for Aurora to get a really bad hangnail next chapter*
YOU DID THIS!!
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Oh! Apogee, Delta Vee and Jet Stream are all characters from Shinodage's "Space Ponyos" comic that I absolutely adore. You can read it here: https://spaceponyos.com/ Early in writing this story I took some time to ask Shino for permission to use his characters and he was generous enough to give me the green light. If you haven't read the comic I really recommend it. It's quick, powerful and has spurred a lot of fan creations, and many fanfics that have inspired Shino in turn. :)
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Exactly, and more often than not people (or in this case ponies) are stubborn idiots and will refuse to leave. More often than not, they'll only leave if something forces them to. So if that's the case, why not make something break so they're forced to leave? Those that don't, well, the world will do better without that idiocy. For if lava is pouring towards you at a snail's pace and you choose to stand and burn, either you have a reason, or you're a stubborn moron.
I love the development of the Tantibus and RD stories. And as Celestia once said, there's no wrong way to fantasize, just saying. I feel that you have found a great way to keep the mental journey's like the ones found in the Blue story line. The mental state of Ginger is fascinating. It could be interesting to dive deeper in all of the group to grow on the previously established mental states. Or, maybe an epic dream fight scene with good guys, bad guys, and Tantibus. Mega Derpy just walking around. Could be awesome. If it doesn't work out, I'll keep that for head Canon.
Enclave development draws a real story there. I like it. If I'm honest, the Brotherhood ponies could use some of that too. They seem a little one dimensional, but that's one storyline in a mass world your building. I don't hate it.
Last thought before I take on the new chapter. I never got into space pony, but that's cool to see Apogee. I'm probably going to get into that thanks to this. It's cool to have that crossover. ANOTHER CROSSOVER IDEA...They fly to the space station, but a space storm throw them off and the shuttle goes off course. They crash into the dark side of the moon and find (grab your black licorice gum) Della Duck! Killer crossover! Ducktales moon theme intensifies! I mean, it could be cool if Luna and Celestia are just hanging out on the dark side of the moon as well, waiting for the crazy to die down. But still, how cool could that be......more head Canon I'm sure
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*immediately makes every word of that canon* Della Duck is 100% stuck on the far side of the moon. ;)
I really agree with the Rangers feeling a bit one-sided. I plan to add a bit more depth but yeah, with all the other stories unfolding I missed a lot of opportunity to build them up. Hopefully I can rectify that soon but in the grand scheme of the story, I don't see much room to squeeze in an Ironshod/Coldbrook backstory. ><
I'm glad the RD/Mane6/Spitfire stories are working for you though. I was nervous about taking too much on but as the story progressed it definitely got a bit easier. More to come on that!
I really like the personality you gave her. I really like this tantabus! She's so benevolent <3 I especially like that she has the capacity for things such as surprise. I'm also super relieved that ginger has found respite from the nightmares. The note on her flinching in her sleep was a really nice touch too and nice attention to detail <3
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh I recall the bit applejack(??? Or was it scoots??) Said about playing dirty with optical cable and electrical cable. I'm guessing spitfire eventually became aware of it
Edit: I'm up to the riddle by delta vee and my guess has clearly changed
Ooooooooooooooof I really hope the neuroleptics that magical pony land came up with are better than the ones humans have. Them side effects are almost a second disease
OoooooooooOOOOOOOoooooOOOOOOOOooo goosebumps!!!!!!!! I love the little side stories and have become personally invested in each and every one of them
Oh no, I really really hope this doesn't show her finding out she lied... But I feel like it wouldn't be here if it wasn't the case >.<
Edit: nooo :<
I really appreciate the fourth wall break here lol
Man, you did an excellent job at portraying apogee, embodying the type of person that can sometimes result from a troubled family where the parents have issues with eachother, Not being the target of outright abuse but still living in a broken family. I like the peering into the story there considering the 2nd apogee comic has been on hiatus for years .-.
Aww she didn't say I love you back :(
All the dates on Autumn's holotapes are dated the year 1187
The decimation of Equestria took place in 1067.
That's a 120-year difference.
Autumn didn't update the clock on her terminal lol.
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Good catch, fixed!