At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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front page Ellie!
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Haha, woo! Front page!
I keep forgetting you have a Fimfiction until I see your Imgur posts.
Alas, good writing Elbow, from HorseMc :)
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Thank you! :)
Holy crap now that is a chapter... The damn jumper cables, my sides almost went to orbit. And Prim is HER, THE REVELATION AYYYYYY, so good! Can't stop saying that the story just gets better and better! The stakes are so high right now, what else would go wrong, or right? Pretty much my favourite story I've read this year! Just, amazing work Ell.
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Aw thank you! I'm really happy with how this chapter turned out. Any reason to write Chops is turning into a good time for me, I really love working with his limitations. It was a real banger of a chapter to put together. <3
Feels like ironshod needs to spend some personal time with off brand nightmare moon. Fuck he's a piece of shit.
while I've had suspicion that something didn't go as planned for spitfire. Definitely seems like she wasn't the only one with plans and got betrayed. Deserves her right.
Great chapter as always
Mmm, thats'a meaty chapter. So much tension :)
Another great chapter, and now another wait for the next that will seem way longer than it actually is because I eagerly look forward to the next one. Bravo!
I regret not reading this story soon enough, I just finished the latest chapter. Well worth the late nights reading, cant wait for more.
"At that instance the alley shimmered."
"At that instant the alley shimmered."?
"Ranger rather"
Is that a typo, or some usage of "rather" I'm not familiar with or having much luck finding in searching? Or am I missing something?
"Dancer let out a derisive snorted and relaxed his stance"
"Dancer let out a derisive snort and relaxed his stance"?
"have more than the once choice"
"have more than the one choice"?
"of a less uncomfortable position to lay in"
"of a less uncomfortable position to lie in"?
"You have until the count of three to tell me where my Jet"
Interesting. I wonder, some of later times blending into the memory, or a sign that Jet in this universe not only predates the bombs falling but predates that by enough that Cozy's father was using it when she was a filly?
"Maybe words she’d chosen weren’t the right"
"Maybe the words she’d chosen weren’t the right"?
"including the local Rangers"
...Yeah, Ironshod, shooting at other Rangers, who are executing legal orders, within their own territory, while you and your forces are on an explicitly unauthorized mission you have been ordered to stand down from, is definitely not the sort of thing you might be accused of, oh, I don't know, treason for. And I'm sure this idea hasn't occurred to any members of your motley crew. Likewise, the rewards they might get for turning you in. Yep.
What, do you think getting the information out of Aurora (which, of course, you're actually completely wrong she even has, a whole additional layer of the problems with this operation) will result in an "All is forgiven!"? I mean, I'm guessing you do, because I don't see how else you expect to get out of this. Or do you expect Elder Coldbrook to not only back you up but go up against another Elder, the one whose territory you were operating in without authorization, for you? Because that sure sounds like it isn't setting a bad precedent for the unity of the Rangers going forward! So, yeah, that "All is forgiven!". Except, see, even if they want to let you off with a slap on the fetlock, that message, as you well know, went out publicly. Which is bad enough for the Rangers' reputation, but if they have then to say "Oops, our bad?". And, again, precedent: sure, you may be totally right in your revelation about the secret Enclave-ness of Aurora's Stable and her knowing all about it, but if it becomes known that any active and explicit willful insubordination will be brushed off if the rewards obtained are big enough, there'll probably be a lot of hotshot young paladins with crazy ideas going off with their friends actively ignored orders and causing trouble without achieving much at all. And militaries, of course, just love it when their soldiers are completely uncontrollable and doing their own thing, right? So, yeah, no. You are at the very least going to get the appearance of punishment for this. Definitely say goodbye to any promotions. Probably say goodbye to service in the Rangers at all. But, hey, they might give you a nice retirement package, and a stipend, so long as you, newly civilian, don't make too much noise about having been right!
[facehoofs]
What an idiot.
(To clarify, my suspension of disbelief is fine here. Not saying he's a bad-in-terms-of-writing-quality character. He's just, you know, an idiot and a danger to himself and others in-universe.)
(...Okay, okay, maybe that's a little harsh on him, but... Yeah. This is a bad plan, and that radio message was where he really, really should have realized that it was time to give it up, stop digging himself deeper, and go along with the orders. The best outcome for him, if he doesn't, is still pretty bad, and that's if everything else goes well for him... which it hasn't been, so far. That his situation is this bad, and he doesn't realize it, and apparently is confident that this is definitely not an instance of the sunk costs fallacy... yeeeeah.)
"It was a paradise compared to the yellowed and torn photographs the ponies of Old Canterlot collected and bartered for."
"It was a paradise compared to the yellowed and torn photographs the ponies of New Canterlot collected and bartered for."?
"have so few happy that are not already"
"have so few happy memories that are not already"?
"the broken shelves laying on the floor"
"the broken shelves lying on the floor"?
"But most notably was the color, or in this case"
"But most notable was the color, or in this case"?
Whew! And finished, with another good but long one. :D
Thanks for writing. :)
That was a helluva chapter!
I just hope that Aurora doesn't end up permanently losing that leg or any other limbs.
Absolutely epic chapter. Love love loved it!
And damn...spitfire got conned too. Hmmm but by who!?
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I'll certainly give it a squizz especially as it appears to involve 'lings.
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Sorry to see you go. Still, if you're struggling to find a story that you want to read, there's no harm in trying to write one yourself.
Bloody hell man :(((((( this was such an incredibly hard thing to read through. Can't imagine it must've been easy to write. I semi spoiled myself by looking at the derpi art for this story and seeing the "no leg" thing but thought it would have happened by accident. Torture is an extremely awful topic in and of itself but reading it happen to characters you've grown to love is just painful
10 years, no?
Wow, this chapter was an emotional rollercoaster. But the highlight was definitely this line:
I really enjoyed how descriptive you were in this short paragraph, I think it added much-needed depth to the scene.
Chops might just be the most insightful Enclave member.
Ayo?
Could you please provide some clarification on Chop's color palette? This chapter said that he's a "dull brown stallion", in chapter 28 he is described as a "midnight black stallion." Is it both? A brown coat with a black mane?