At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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Ah! Thank you too! I've gotten terrible about replying to comments in a timely manner, eeee...
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You have no idea how annoyed I was when IDW brought him back in the comics for G5. I've had Discord sitting on the sidelines for this encounter for years! Aaaaaagh!
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Thank you, these chapters have been sitting in my notes for a long while now and finally getting to sit down and finalize them feels good. It's been a long time coming. I hope I keep doing them some justice. :)
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And a new chapter just went up! So glad you've been enjoying it. <3
do i need to read the original fallout equestria to read this? if so then i must inform you that i am literally incapable of reading the original
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Nope, not at all! This story is entirely independent of Kkat's. Different story, different characters, different universe. I wanted to write with a fresh slate. :)
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great! just one more question. i saw you wrote a chapter that is almost exactly 40K words... are you ok?
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Hahaha, that is a fair question. I'm doing alright. I tend to write a little more to the bulkier side because I like to keep a lot of pots on the burner at once. The arc of the story is straightforward but I divvy out scenes for other characters as well, showing how they're being pulled along the protagonist's wake. The 40k chapter was an anomaly though - no spoilers, but it marked an important point in the story. I try to keep chapter length closer to 20,000 words for the sake of everyone's sanity. ^_^
Things keep getting better and better. I just can't get over how captivating your writing style is. Love the stories you weave!
Seeing Tandy finally take a side and make a stand is really satisfying. Even if all she did was ensure Primrose never slept again that'd be enough to drive her insane before too long. I suspect her plan involves a bit more tearing down her entire world bit by bit though. Not accounting for the closest thing to a goddess left in the world seems slightly short-sighted for Primrose though, so maybe she's still got something up her sleeve? I also really enjoyed Discord's characterization here. I see we're leaning into the Q bit, especially with the Picard reference. Looking forward to more!
a chonky chapter. It seemed like Tandy seeked acceptance there at the end to continue to bring suffering to Primrose, after Ginger made her stop it previously.
Great as always
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Thank you! Finally I get some use from my rambling streams of consciousness, haha!
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She never could stay neutral forever, especially now that she saw an opportunity to intervene spoiled by how little she hid her ability to know minds. :( Discord as Q is something I've been champing at the bit to do. I always loved him in Trek, writing him here is like a brain treat!
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Chonk indeed, but worthwhile chonk! You're reading Tandy right, too. That's all I can say about that. ;)
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Thank you!
Let her feel every curse, every lash, every touch of malice that she first dealt to you, Aurora.
Good work, Ellie.
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Thank you kindly <3
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dude what the f**k. also does she remember anything?
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Now that would be telling. ^_^
Minotaur? I thought Tirek was considered a centaur?
Anyway, really enjoying the story, Elbow!
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Huh, you know, I'm not 100% sure now! Aaand a quick google search says you're right! Heck, time to make an edit!
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I suppose if Cider had been thinking with some clarity he might not have been as impulsive as he was. That, and probably more likely, the author didn't think to consider that option when she wrote it. XD Fair play on that. As for Ginger, without giving anything away early, she's banging hard on the Rarity mannerisms for a purpose. I don't think it's too much of a spoiler to suggest she'll back off wearing that costume over time.
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Hah! Is that where folks have been trickling in from this week? I'm glad you've enjoyed the beginning and thank you for the compliment! Happy binging, let me know what you think!
Yeah! Fuck primrose with a rusty screwdriver!
8/10 lack of firearm related violence
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Lol, decimate means to reduce by 10% whereas devastate means reduce by up to 90%. Yes, language is fluid to a point, but if it is too fluid words become meaningless. Using decimate instead of devastate reduces greatly the amount of destruction you are implying took place...
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I disagree insofar that I'm not a language purist, and that the dictionary definition of the word includes usage that refers to general, large-scale destruction.
See definition 3b: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/decimate
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Friend. Sweetheart. Darling.
It's a fucking postnuke horse fanfic, not War and Peace.
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Yeah. Definitely just you, darling.
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Lol.
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Ah, gotcha. I made the mistake of assuming I was responding to a functional adult. Since acknowledging mistakes isn't your can of sardines, I think it's best to move on.
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I have been wondering do EFS not Exist in this reality of Fallout Equestria?
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EFS... Eyes Forward Sparkle? No, I decided against writing in some of the more gamey-feeling aspects of Fallout in favor of more realism. Or, as realistic as you can get with magical nuclear ponies. ;)
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Oh, crud, cut myself off. I wanted to add that I've been rolling around the idea of a new story that would feature something like EFS/VATS with some prominence, but contained within a synth character where I'd be able to tie it into a machine ability. Still banging the idea on rocks to see where the cracks form, though. Something like that could become incredibly unbalanced and it's tricky to set down limitations that don't feel too arbitrary.
“I renewed your magic gave you the magical equivalent of a potent dose of mentats,” Tandy stated.
Man I didn't even think of Tandys reaction to Ginger's death; I really liked this scene and how it played out. I feel bad for Tandy <3 but I hope she metes out some proper consequences for this
Yasss!!!!!! Actual unavoidable repercussions for your monstrous actions! I RELISHED these few short paragraphs showing her actually frightened by this
Awwwww!!!! This is so sad <\3
your AvE is showing lol
YYYYAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!! This is the most cathartic thing to happen yet honestly, renewing her magique. I LOVE the idea of aurora teaming up with Tandy for some cloak-and-dagger sneaky sneaky payback.