At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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Yay it updated. Good chapter but damn it got more answers that just keep creating more questions.
Always glad to see a new chapter!
With every chapter it just gets better and better, the last time I've read a story with this much enthusiasm was when I was reading Murky Number Seven, and let me tell ya, this amazing story is just as much exhilarating. Also, if you didn't read it, I wholeheartedly endorse that story, one of my absolute favourites, if not the.
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;) It's as if I'm doing it on purpose for some reason, hah!
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Always glad to see a new comment!
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I've *heard* of Murky but I haven't had a chance to read it yet! Is that the one with the house on the beach with the blue star on the door? I thhhhink that one is ongoing and I've always been a little peanut butter and jealous of how slick the character looks in fanart! ;) One of these days I'm going to have to break out the purse and start hounding someone for commissions, but if that author's putting in the work then I should probably give an honest crack at the story! :o
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No, it's another Fallout Equestria sidefic, but it's just amazing!
"if she’d known what would lead to"
"if she’d known what it would lead to"?
"She msy not even be in Fillydelphia anymore"
"She may not even be in Fillydelphia anymore"?
"the sidewalk Ginger and Roach come in from, their"
"the sidewalk Ginger and Roach had come in from, their"?
"behind their sights, unphased by anything they"
"behind their sights, unfazed by anything they"?
"sound of the lone mare’s hooves were quickly fading into"
"sound of the lone mare’s hooves was quickly fading into"?
"around her? Had Jet Stream been in on it, too?"
"around her? Had Jet Stream been in on it, too?"?
This one isn't an error, but given she already considered and dismissed Jet Stream, and is now reconsidering him as a result of thinking she was blind to the treason of others, the emphasis seemed to me more fitting than its lack; I thought, therefore, that I'd suggest it.
"now everything she’d even known was dead and dust"
"now everything she’d ever known was dead and dust"?
"Laying there, her knees curled"
"Lying there, her knees curled"?
And finished! Another enjoyable chapter, and thank you for writing!
...Except.
Well, another multi-threaded cliffhanger?! :D
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re Murky Number Seven:
I'm not sure what story you're talking about, sorry; MN7 finished on FIMFiction in 2016, it looks like. It's possible the house on the beach with the blue star is later in the story than I stopped, though; relatedly, I can partially recommend it, as by I and a friend who were reading it years ago agreed we liked the start, and how it carried on for a while. Both of us eventually decided that it eventually got worse enough to stop reading, though (though at different points). Still, of course, tastes vary, and as with the person you're replying to about that, other people seem to have liked it all the way through; I'm not sure how you'd find the whole thing.
edit:
Oh, and, indeed, a pleasantly lower typo density this time, at least as far as I noticed. I know you do your best anyway and that it's just that conditions vary sometimes, but still, thanks. :)
edit2:
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Oh, I thought I remembered it having a T rating! Thanks for confirming that that wasn't just my memory glitching. :D
Also, yeah, given the role "Blue" is playing, I'm surprised she was so unplanned -- but it does seem to be working out! :)
9/10 chapter needs more gun
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More rooty tooty point n' shooty
Oh boy. Place yer bets on how many limbs Aurora is left with at the end of this.
Ooh, a Kirin. I wonder how many of them are around.
Hmmm interesting point that Shitfire clearly knew it was coming well beforehand. So, she and Primrose are a part of it...but I guess we already knew that (or highly suspected it), and it feels like a bit of a distraction. By Dash's own thoughts the bombs required both princesses to launch...and yet I haven't gotten the feeling that Luna here was the sort to have participated in this kind of crazy. So I'm still on board for Celestia being a conspirator, but I guess it's possible that either they found a way around needing Luna's authorization, or some way to fool one or both princesses into pushing the big red buttons. Seems like in the latter case they might have noticed that the targets were all in Equestria, though.
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Or it was all top-secret pegasus agent Muffins...
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Also, after the passing description of the rubble of Old Canterlot, I'm really curious about what happened in its last moments. From the descriptions, it seems like the city itself may not have been directly targeted, just undermined and left to collapse. If it wasn't hit right to the face with a bomb, that certainly seems like it would have left a moment for some strong magic users to teleport away. It also seems like it leaves room for Discord to have survived, entombed somewhere in the ruins.
I wonder how long the air lasts in an unpowered Stable...
You brought me here from imgur and gave me an excellent reason to ruin my sleep schedule for 2-3 nights. 10/10 please update more often.
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Ok look here fun police…
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...Pardon? I'm sorry, I'm afraid I don't understand your comment.
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Well what if I want to horrible mangle English language kn book, huh! Yu gona stp that?
(It’s poorly written sarcasm, sorry for that)
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Ah. Well, it's different if it's deliberate. :D
(No problem, and thanks for the explanation. :))
Lots of great stuff this chapter. It's refreshing to meet an elder who isn't automatically hostile. Sure, he's not sending his whole chapter out to solve the team's problems, but he reacted reasonably given the circumstances. I also thought the torture scene was super well done despite how painful that can be to write sometimes. Finally, I'm glad to see Julip and Roach's relationship continue to deepen. I appreciate that they have a unique bond that rest of the party doesn't share. Too often it seems a new character has an introduction arc, then before you know it everyone on the team is automatically great friends with them. The fractured dynamics are much more believable and immersive.
Soooo loved this update!!!
Can't wait for mooreee!!!
And damn ironshod you crazy!
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Ooh, so I don't think it's a spoiler at this point since it was covered in a flashback. I genuinely can't remember which chapter it was in, but I'll say that Canterlot wound up collapsing from a balefire missile striking the mountain underneath the platform it rested upon. Just enough punch to shatter the foundation and send the city crumbling into the fire. New Canterlot is built within sight of the ruins at the foot of Canterlot Mountain, much of which has been picked through for construction material as well as relics from the past (i.e. the princesses' thrones which appear in the Chapel of the Two Sisters).
And yeah, I have a feeling Sledge is wondering how long the air's going to last, too...
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^_^ Welcome to the site, its awesome to see more people coming over from Imgur! I try to update once a month, though the last few months have slowed me down due to everything that's going on offline. Still, making progress!
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I think we were overdue for a faction leader that wasn't a heartless monster, haha! Writing Elder Coronado is definitely a highlight. This is just my headcanon talking, but I like to think that his job is much less stressful and affords him more room for charity. I mean the horse has zebra auto-turrets guarding the skies and he's days away from the nearest Enclave border. Might as well be guarding Hawaii! ;)
The torture scenes, yeah, they're rough. Tricky part for me is giving them a point. At this point it's Ironshod's show, and I don't think he has a ready supply of prewar stimpacks available like a certain dehorned psycho did.
There's more Roach and Julip to come. I've been itching to build this weird relationship since she got sprung from her cell umpteen chapters ago. <3
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I'm actually ahead of schedule with the current chapter! Oooooh, things are happening things are HAPPENING
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You've got good timing, I'm in the process of reading through Chapter 35's draft tonight! Sucks to hear you got the gag on Imgur, but feel free to ask questions or share feedback here if you like. I am aiming for more of a grounded story with Renewal, you guessed it. I do love the Wild Wasteland feel to the Fallout series at times, but there are a lot of moments where the melancholy or tragedy Obsidian and Bethesda try to demonstrate get undercut by the silliness. I wanted to try to balance that a little more evenly. I wasn't too huge a fan of the stat tracking either. It's unique as a writing device but sometimes they felt tacked on and didn't impact the story or characters. I think there's still a lot of room for someone to take that and make it really bang, but I'm definitely not the right writer for it.
As for total length...? I'd say we're a bit more than halfway through. Probably closer to two-thirds. The story had a definitive end that I'm writing toward so you don't have to worry about it meandering off into the weeds. :)
I started to get the same feeling just before reading this. They're the only ones who would have had the motivation to do it. Still barely makes sense as to why spitfire would willingly confine themselves to a bunker for the rest of their miserable existence and commit mass genocide against innocent people tho, I especially feel bad for the ambassador and the rest of vhanna. Spitfire and primrose are easily some of the most veritably Evil with a capital E, antagonists ive read in fiction
I am extremely happy to see she's alive; you did such a good job at redeeming her character and making her likeable and now I've got an emotional investment in seeing her come out the other side of this alright
Doctor pepper is best soda
Kirin!!!!???!!! Yasssss
Oh. Oh no.
OH NOOOO!!!!
Wow, where do I even begin?? Elder Coronado is so cool!
I don't know if intentional or not, but Ironshod's usage of the freezer does reflect some psychological studies. Giving Aurora a brief break from the freezing likely kept her from giving up and dying of hypothermia. She had hope that she may again be spared from the cold, thus making her last longer than she should have.
I like how the horseshoes are like spiky crocs, although I think many are less enthused about what they were used for.
Didn't a previous chapter say that they were already there for a supposed test drill?
Chapt 31, yes Spitfire had scheduled a "drill."
Did... Did Ginger accidentally cut off part of her tail while teleporting?
Arguably. Only one way to find out.
The guard stallion changed into a mare?
Either Roach switched bags with Ginger, which means for some time he had the talisman. Or those darn jackets are at it again. From Chapt. 33:
Jackets must be magical in this story, this is the third jacket that has magically changed locations.