At the bottom of Stable 10, the great generator that has kept its residents alive for centuries is beginning to fail. As solutions are sought within, one pegasus sets her sights on the very ponies who built - and possibly sabotaged - her home.
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dang, this is getting good. I know I shouldn't, but man I am loving primrose so far. That mare knows how to get things done! lol
Golly indeed.
So, this kinda seems like with Stable 1 Spitfire1 decided to shove a bunch of important unicorns into it and then off them, because she a racist binch. I actually think I recall something similar in OG FO:E with the Stable in Canterlot? However, that wouldn't really require this massive and weird redesign...would it? Hmm...the thought just entered my mind, "What happened to the Princesses?"
I'm also starting to wonder just how far Spitfire's whole thing goes. Maybe the balefire leaked because she wanted it to. STOP IMMANENTIZING THE ESCHATON, SPITEFIRE. 2
Also, I was thinking it was strange that so many unicorns died trying to teleport out, and maybe it's something about the design of the stable or something inside. However, I just realized that with how it's been described it could also be a simple consequence of the balefire3. Even if the stable kept it out and let them use magic inside, maybe as soon as they passed beyond the balefire would slurp it all up and kill the teleport spell before they were fully outside. RIP?
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Even pony nazis know their blackmail it seems. When's the putsch tho?
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She's quickly becoming one of my favorites to write scenes for. :)
"that her shield had nearly to slag"
"that her shield had nearly turned to slag"?
"ramp. Brair's commandeered"
"ramp. Briar's commandeered"?
"residents to be tramples. What"
"residents to be trampled. What"?
"falling to their death if one railing"
"falling to their death is one railing"?
"Primrose followed her gaze to the rook on her flank and snorted. “Gods, no."
Interesting; what/which gods, I wonder?
"free wing menacincly in the"
"free wing menacingly in the"?
"She has more teeth to be afraid of"
"She has more teeth than to be afraid of"?
"Gusty might be in the family way"
...Eh?
And another excellent chapter! And with some questions answered... and others raised. :D
Thanks for writing!
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Glad you're enjoying it. :)
She's... something, alright. :D
You are an excellent writer. I really want to see how this train wreck of a world came to pass now. My money is on Spitfire nuking her own country...
Also, can you imagine Scootalo giving her a hard look, running out of a hidden door and then poison gas filling the room? Spitfire bangs on the door ineffectual, then yells "What the hell did you have on her?!"
"I don't know, I was just bluffing!"
"What?!"
They both end up dead in a hole somewhere and we flash back to Scoot muttering darkly "No one can ever know..."
And that is why you don't threaten someone who builds bunkers for a living in their own office.
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Thank you! <3 I fully accept the alternative universe version of Scootaloo locking down Stable-Tec HQ in a fit of panic and knocking everyone out for individual reprogramming. XD
This is such a fresh take on FoE universe, it's unbelievably good. Every chapter is something I'm always waiting for with glee.
Love it, reading this feels so fresh, it's something absolutely new! Great job, waiting for the next chapter as hard as Homelands.
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Thank you! It's been incredibly satisfying to write, especially now that the backstory is linking up more and more with current events. :)
Dang.....Primrose means business. I wonder why her name is different than Cozy Glow, but I reckon that may come up later.
I've been binge-reading this series and just realized I should be leaving comments. So many good things have occured! I love this. I've tried to read the original Fallout Equestria however it is so long that I keep losing track. I'm not sure if I finished Blackjack or not but I did read Pink Eyes, which was good, though the filly did annoy me a lot. I love the new lore you're creating for this.
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Ooh, welcome aboard new reader! It's mentioned during Prim's interview with Spitfire that she's been known to have authored some less-than-appropriate materials under what Spitfire believes is a pseudonym, Cozy Glow, but I can easily understand how that blip of info could be missed. It's meant to suggest that Cozy at some point abandoned her foalhood name and adopted a new identity. Personally, I think she was up to no good as a kid and wanted to get away from the stigma of her criminal record. Good thing she's an angel now! ;)
I absolutely thrive on comments so don't be shy! Any questions I can answer without giving away the game, I will! I realize there's a lot going on in this story so any clarification you need I'll try to offer!
I hate how evil and conniving Primrose is, but I love her because of how you wrote her. I kinda wonder what the sole purpose of Stable 1 is with its unique design.
Welp, now I'm even more annoyed that Spitfire got to live out her days in a Stable for the shit she's done.
Just like so many mass murderers in history, she had power and money enough to get away with it.
I recently read the comic for delta vee and apogee and it warms my heart to think delta go into a stable safe and sound <3
Man, I knew this was gonna be bad for everyone. Spitfire immediately let everything go to her head. She was a liability from the start.
Oof :( bluffed her way through it. There's few things as scummy as manipulation; I hope both of them get what's coming to them