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ElbowDeepInAHorse


Hobbyist Author, Mystery Maker, Typewriter Restorer. https://ko-fi.com/elbowdeepinahorse

Comments ( 69 )

exactly the kind of story I was looking for.

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Exactly the kind I was wanting to write! Glad you enjoyed! :twilightsmile:

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Cash money, minus the cleaning costs of that armor...

For the first time he seemed to notice the gap. His ears, or what was left of them, bent backward. “Do you hear how much that sounds like a bad porno, or is it just me?”

Please PLEASE tell me this is canon omg I love it

He bellowed. “QUEEN CHRYSALIS’S EGGHOLE LET GO!”

II can't breathe xD this is great.

This was an amazing read. Loved every minute of it. Great work!

First chapter review: not focusing on the lore, you painted a great picture, without relying too much on what the audience knows. I followed the plot fluidly, and had not seen any spelling or grammar mistakes. Also this is the first story I read from you, Elbow

Chapter 2 review: me likey

Hot daym, that ending tho

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106% canon, if you pay attention as the story progresses you might notice a mention or two ;)

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Glad you enjoyed it! I was expecting a little bit more of a I was expecting a little bit more of a rough reception being this is my first clopfic x3

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Phew, that's what I've been hoping to hear! The toughest part I've experienced with writing it's not being sure if the audience is experiencing the narrative as clearly as I can picture it in my head. Also welcome aboard, new reader!

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it's the best clop flic I've ever read. most of the time I can't even get past the first chapter. really excited to see what you do next!

The raider shoulda joined in

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Aw heck, thank you! I know for a fact there's better ones out there, though. Have you followed @Clopficsinthecomments? That fella is the only one so far who writes Anon in Equestria content that I genuinely enjoy! That and, obviously all the Apogee fics. :3

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Three ponies in one suit of power armor?? That sounds like a prototype for smash burgers. xD

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Either way it'd make for an interesting tale

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Definitely something to consider... ;)

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Same here. The popularly used term is "bellyriding" if you're looking to find more :)

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Yeah, I know that term. But like many porn terms, its not a consistently recognized one. When I was in the furry community the closest term they had was 'tied together' because websites would ban them on bestiality grounds. (And thats to say nothing of the Japanese furry community which absolutely blows away the "Western" furry community.) Its becoming more common these days but a quick look at the "Last Page" of any search and its obviously a recent change.

Oh my God that ending! I may existasathrowaway but man that was a quality finally

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I couldn't help but add a nod to the absolute ridiculousness of what was happening on the outside ;)

what a pleasent surpise.
i wasnt expecting clop right up until his dick actualy came out, but it was a present surpise.

Yo, fantastic. Great premise, just the right amount of exposition and character introduction to get invested, and a fun time had by all.

That was some top-notch, awkward, not-exactly-wanted-by-anyone Fo:E clop!

Luckily, what happens in the armor, stays in the armor. :rainbowlaugh:

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I'm glad you enjoyed the turn in focus ;)

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Thank you! I wanted to keep it lighthearted and natural and it sounds like that worked out!

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Eat your heart out, Vegas! :D

I haven't read the main story yet, but when does this story take place in it?

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About 3-4 chapters ahead of where Renewal is now, depending on my pacing. Around Chapter 32/33. This clopfic isn't an important plot point in itself - when the main fic reaches this section it'll be solidly focused on a different group of characters. The clopfic mostly serves as an answer to "what were those two up to?"

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the lack of the comma makes it even better

Haha, they both knew exactly what was going to happen the moment she suggested it!

Probably the only thing keeping him sober and rational was a lucky balance of adrenaline. With blood pumping hot it would be literally impossible to back down in that position anyways.
Glad she realized and consented.

What happens in the armor, stays in the armor. Until you eject and it comes gushing out in all its both glory.
You'd think the designers would have thought of what happens if the driver relieves themselves (intentionally or not) while wearing it...
That was a lucky roll on that Raider. 😇

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That's one thing I wanted to be careful to make clear, silly as the situation was from the start. :)

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;) Roach is going to have pruned hooves if he has to spend the next few hours sloshing around in that mess.

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"it's good for your complexion!"
"what complexion?!"

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You'd think the designers would have thought of what happens if the driver relieves themselves (intentionally or not) while wearing it...

There is one solution, associated with a completely different fetish...

And for what it's worth, in Fallout 2 it's stated that Enclave power armor can recycle bodily fluids into drinkable water. There is a child somewhere with whom you can discuss that feature:

"Recycling means you drink pee!"

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Lubricants gotta lube after all. 😘

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Interesting concept, kinda like landbased astronauts! Maybe I can sneak this reference into Renewal... it'd be a fun nod to this clopfic, and an opportunity for Roach and Julip to realize, belatedly, that he could have put his dick elsewhere all along. XD

Scorpions are arachnids, not insects.
I’ve never seen a fight scene combined with a sex scene before. This is amazing.

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Corrections will be made immediately! Also I'm glad the combat humps worked for ypu ;p

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I’ve never seen a fight scene combined with a sex scene before. This is amazing.

I have, in the movie "Drive Angry".

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i have not read their work yet actually lol. ill give some of those a read though! thanks for the recommendations! ^^

The dangers of not wearing pants.

HAAHAHAH!! THAT. THAT WAS EPIC.

I LOVED IT. You wrote it so well it didn't feel like a porno. And I applaud you for this. It was a good story.

AND I WANT MORE OF THESE TWO.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! If another idea for a bit of clop weasels into my head again, you'll be sure to see it here!

The layout wasn’t terribly complicated. Two sleeves at the rear and two more at the front made it pretty clear where her legs needed to go.

I'm sure there was still at one point someone who got it wrong...

The words PRESS TO EJECT were stenciled in white paint across each red crescent.
“What the hell are those?”
“That’s how you open the suit. Hold them both down for three seconds and the armor pops open or shut.”
“Oh,” she murmured.
“You thought it had an ejection seat, didn’t you?”
She wrinkled her nose, trying hard not to smirk. “Shut up.”

To be fair, I had the same thought...

“It's not rocket surgery,” she said, gesturing toward the space beneath him. “I can fit under there.”
For the first time he seemed to notice the gap. His ears, or what was left of them, bent backward. “Do you hear how much that sounds like a bad porno, or is it just me?”

Even if it is, it would still make for a good story.

If you think you can fit, we can give it a try. Just… try not to hit any switches.

Later they learned the hard way the suit did have an ejection seat...

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