Cash Money

exactly the kind of story I was looking for.

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Exactly the kind I was wanting to write! Glad you enjoyed!

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Cash money, minus the cleaning costs of that armor...

This was an amazing read. Loved every minute of it. Great work!

Hot daym, that ending tho

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106% canon, if you pay attention as the story progresses you might notice a mention or two ;)

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Glad you enjoyed it! I was expecting a little bit more of a I was expecting a little bit more of a rough reception being this is my first clopfic x3

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Phew, that's what I've been hoping to hear! The toughest part I've experienced with writing it's not being sure if the audience is experiencing the narrative as clearly as I can picture it in my head. Also welcome aboard, new reader!

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YUUUUSSSS!!!

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it's the best clop flic I've ever read. most of the time I can't even get past the first chapter. really excited to see what you do next!

The raider shoulda joined in

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Aw heck, thank you! I know for a fact there's better ones out there, though. Have you followed @Clopficsinthecomments? That fella is the only one so far who writes Anon in Equestria content that I genuinely enjoy! That and, obviously all the Apogee fics. :3

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Three ponies in one suit of power armor?? That sounds like a prototype for smash burgers. xD

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Either way it'd make for an interesting tale

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Definitely something to consider... ;)

I like the fetish

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Same here. The popularly used term is "bellyriding" if you're looking to find more :)

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Yeah, I know that term. But like many porn terms, its not a consistently recognized one. When I was in the furry community the closest term they had was 'tied together' because websites would ban them on bestiality grounds. (And thats to say nothing of the Japanese furry community which absolutely blows away the "Western" furry community.) Its becoming more common these days but a quick look at the "Last Page" of any search and its obviously a recent change.

Oh my God that ending! I may existasathrowaway but man that was a quality finally

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I couldn't help but add a nod to the absolute ridiculousness of what was happening on the outside ;)

what a pleasent surpise.
i wasnt expecting clop right up until his dick actualy came out, but it was a present surpise.

Yo, fantastic. Great premise, just the right amount of exposition and character introduction to get invested, and a fun time had by all.

That was some top-notch, awkward, not-exactly-wanted-by-anyone Fo:E clop!

Luckily, what happens in the armor, stays in the armor.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the turn in focus ;)

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Thank you! I wanted to keep it lighthearted and natural and it sounds like that worked out!

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Eat your heart out, Vegas! :D

I haven't read the main story yet, but when does this story take place in it?

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About 3-4 chapters ahead of where Renewal is now, depending on my pacing. Around Chapter 32/33. This clopfic isn't an important plot point in itself - when the main fic reaches this section it'll be solidly focused on a different group of characters. The clopfic mostly serves as an answer to "what were those two up to?"

What happens in the armor, stays in the armor. Until you eject and it comes gushing out in all its both glory.
You'd think the designers would have thought of what happens if the driver relieves themselves (intentionally or not) while wearing it...
That was a lucky roll on that Raider. 😇

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;) Roach is going to have pruned hooves if he has to spend the next few hours sloshing around in that mess.

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"it's good for your complexion!"
"what complexion?!"

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You'd think the designers would have thought of what happens if the driver relieves themselves (intentionally or not) while wearing it...

There is one solution, associated with a completely different fetish...

And for what it's worth, in Fallout 2 it's stated that Enclave power armor can recycle bodily fluids into drinkable water. There is a child somewhere with whom you can discuss that feature:

"Recycling means you drink pee!"

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Lubricants gotta lube after all. 😘

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Interesting concept, kinda like landbased astronauts! Maybe I can sneak this reference into Renewal... it'd be a fun nod to this clopfic, and an opportunity for Roach and Julip to realize, belatedly, that he could have put his dick elsewhere all along. XD

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I’ve never seen a fight scene combined with a sex scene before. This is amazing.

I have, in the movie "Drive Angry".

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i have not read their work yet actually lol. ill give some of those a read though! thanks for the recommendations! ^^

HAAHAHAH!! THAT. THAT WAS EPIC.

I LOVED IT. You wrote it so well it didn't feel like a porno. And I applaud you for this. It was a good story.

AND I WANT MORE OF THESE TWO.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! If another idea for a bit of clop weasels into my head again, you'll be sure to see it here!

Servos kicked into gear as he found a sturdier rhythm, drawing himself out several more inches just as the rest of the armor compensated for the motion. She coughed a happy little yip of profanity as her clit slipped out of her cleft with appreciation, only to be buried roughly against the friction of Roach’s deliciously warm bug dick.
“Like that?”
She squeezed her eyes shut and grinned. “Like that.”

Yes, exactly like that.
Looks probably quite interesting from the outside.

I expect the Steel Ranger quartermaster who receives the armor takes one good look sniff at it and immediately decides those two can keep it, with no questions asked (for his own sanity).

Steel rangers are gonna melt it down for scrap once they realize what happened in there lmao

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Hahaha hopefully it doesn't have moisture sensors to give it away ;)

OMG. You did "A Spacesuit Built for Two" in powered armor. Brilliant, although at this juncture in the main story, it's difficult to visualize the only problem these two have with the act being Roach's preferred gender.

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Ooh, is that a fanfic on this site? If so, link please! :3 And yeah, getting Roach and Julip together was always going to take some situational chicanery. This sidequest of theirs has in no way changed Roach's interests and I do look forward to writing the "after" awkwardness that exists between them later.

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Alas, no. It's a reference to Heinlein's "Green Hills of Earth." One of the bawdier songs the blind engineer-bard Rhysling is supposed to've sung was "A Spacesuit Built for Two," presumably a lewder descendant of "A Bicycle Built for Two."

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Well you know what you have to do, don't you? Nobody's written this into a pony fic yet! Prime real estate, go go go!

Ya know you’re probably the most qualified person to write smut on this entire site 🤔. Like an astronaut writing speculative sci-if but instead of going to space it’s jerking off horses. Very comforting to know as a reader, lol.

Really solid fic, hope you do more like it in the future. Looking forward to seeing Renewal wrap up, too.

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Now that's high praise! XD
I do want to try out more clopfics in the near future, some of which might just center around Renewal again. I just need to find the time and the right inspiration for it. If I think of something potent enough to interrupt my main fic like this one did, you can bet I'll write it!
Now off I go back to sleep! The non-technicolor horses at work have no mercy for tired handlers. ><

We need more!!!

So well written! With actual plot! And then PLOT!

well we want that plot...to thicken. Aaand maybe burn out the solenoids...again...and again...and again.

Oh, this was well done! Looking forward to more chapters! If you're looking for a spell checker or editor, I'm on board!

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^_^ I'll finagle something together eventually, but right now I don't have an idea for a follow-up that really grabs me yet. Something will come to mind! I'm glad you enjoyed my first foray into clop though!