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The Man. The Legend. The World's Strongest Writer

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It no doubt leaves one smelling of fish and poor life choices:trollestia:

the word "marecum" was not used enough

Oh, the plot is thickening as of now, next chapter here we go. By the way, who was the Mother & Son duo that Button Mash watched porn of?

Well, this corperation sure is kinky, but exactly the kind of kinky that i am into.
Now for the next chapter. But before i go there i just have to warn a Stallion.
One more slip up like that Sunburst & it is off to Bad Colts Camp for you.

A Clone-A-Willy kit you say, hmm... i wonder were this is going?
Also, i wonder if Cream Heart & her little man, are going to become co-workers soon?

Well, i kinda knew that this was like Thanos would like to put it, Inevitable but HOLY Cream! Things went from like 3 to a clean 9 i a quicky.
Fucking eachother during worktime & then fucking again at home during freetime. Man! what, a, life!

Oh my goodness, this was an amazing Late Mother's Day story, utterly fantastic.
Then ending was so sweet and heartwarming, i utterly loved it. Great job my friend, great job.

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Now, i just can't wait to read what you will have in store for us in the form of a fic during this years Father's Day.

Would love to see a side chapter of Stellar Flare and Sunburst as I am pretty sure she has connected the dots with Cream Heart and would want some healty competiton on the foal-making.

I expected more competence from the Equestria Commission

11606174
Indeed, what did I expect from them

Seems like just a mere clopfic wasn't enough for you, you wrote a friggin' novel out of this premise. :rainbowlaugh:

What a ride indeed. :pinkiehappy:

huh. a lady and the tramp reference

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I did not expect anybody to catch that.

that is a lot of Marecum subtags

For Fuck Sakes... this is why I don't write Mother's Day stories. You nailed it, you bastard.

11607055
You should still write anyway. Write for yourself. Write because you want to.
Not to try to compete with me. :rainbowkiss:
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Something tells me somepony could use Essence to conquer Equestria by flooding the Canterlot Royal Guard barracks ventilation system and waiting a week

The Master delivers better than the Mistress yet again.:eeyup:

Less than a month later, the Blue Flu pandemic had ended.

Everyone wants to forget about Pandemics
Nobody though the past Years been fun....
And now it's in fanfics...

It is just annoying.
Really took a good bite out of my enjoyment 😒

Just why?... there are many other things to replace it with. Bug infestation. Cutie pox. Another super villain.

Thought Fimfic is a happy place but now i gotta be vary it seems. What a bummer 😞

Ps. That isn't to say the premise and rest isn't interesting. You write well. It just that word. It grinds so many gears.

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In the epilogue

"Yes, I'd like some watermelon..." Cream said. "And I've been craving some chop suey!"

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It's been a while since I last watched Lady and the Tramp, so I don't recognize the line.

11617567
Yes. That reference was just for the scholars to appreciate. :raritywink:

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