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I kind of want this fic to get a sequel based on this ending.
That was a very real and unexpected read for me. Granted, I sort of see Filthy and Spoiled's married life being something like this in a way.
I'm not sure which ending I want to chose as canon.
I like this ending.
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so do i ^^ certainly a surprising plot twist xD
Huh the goey one? With the goey stuff?
Good taste... (the picture.not the stuff)
> only 534 words
"You raised my hopes and dashed them quite expertly sir. Bravo."
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Shining fucked and filled Twilight with cum.
Never realized how easy it was to write a Shining x Twilight incest fic.
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I see it the same way as well, and I'll be honest the end had me laughing.
There's very little in this fic that I don't like. Actually, nothing comes to mind. Love the names of the two colts, though I wonder what kind of a life someone called Pool Party would live. Can't be any worse than Party Favour, can it?
I preferred the first ending
*favorites on the premise alone*
I like this one
I loved the ending number one but ending number three leaves so many possibilities.
Think this here should be a Filthy
thinks
Definitely ending number one...
Though I'd prefer more comeuppance on Spoiled...
You DEFINITELY manage to portray her as the character you love to hate ^^;;
Let's be real if Shakes wrote this they'd all be related.
And Celestia would be watching from the bush's.
Pretty much this ending is the only thing that made this whole ordeal bearable for me. Spoiled was just horrid, nice work on that.
This is the best ending in my opinion. Hoping to see them getting fucked side by side.
I liked ending One best. Just feels more in line with the story, and Diamond is too mature and observant not to notice what her mom does. Plus, I just love her personality now that she not being a brat.
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Me too, actually!
So I'm guessing there have been several vacation trips to the Zebra lands in the past?
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Frequent flyer miles.
Well you got busted!
I've read this a few times now. It's sexy each time. Can we get a follow-up with Diamond Tiara and Pool Party?
I prefer this ending: the cliffhanger. No comedic twist, no betrayal of the kinks built up to this point. Stop here and it's just beautiful and sexy.
I must be in the minority, because this was precisely what I was looking for: a cock-starved cougar getting utterly satisfied by a couple studly colts. Your portrayal of her bitchiness and the way it twists to utter lust was glorious, and the turn-around with Filthy and the boys flipping Spoiled's cruelty back on her was perfect. The descriptions were detailed, delightful, and absolutely erotic.
If I was making an ending, it would feature a gravid Spoiled Rich, annoyed with how her little ploy has led to her carrying some mudpony gardener's foal, with Filthy satisfied both that the humiliation of who she deigned to fuck is enough to keep Spoiled silent, but also that he'll be getting a son (or second daughter) soon, while Pool and Pollen head off into the sunset with the satisfaction of fucking a mature, married mare's brains out and still strutting away to their bright futures, no strings attached. It's not funny, it's not a twist, but it's erotically satisfying, and after such a fantastic clopfic, I feel that's the closure it truly deserves.
If you ever plan to write more smut of this quality involving mature mares, adultery, age difference, or themes of that sort, consider me an eager subscriber and an avid financial supporter, should you have a Patreon or commission box handy.
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Wow! That's a lovely comment, thank you so much! A lot of my fics are in this sort of vein, though fewer are of the 'comeuppance' type.