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Sexy time!!
Me hoping nobody notices I re-wrote the short description like a million times after publishing.
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It looks good so far.
I think you accidentally left it in incomplete status .
Great story though!
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I'm glad you liked it! In the author's box of the last chapter I wrote:
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Happy you approve.
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I say go for it, what you have so far is great and I would read more.
Good, enjoyable story. I'm curious about whether or not it's done, though.
Lovely piece you wrote here, Jack. I didn't expect a heartwarming fic with these characters
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The way you worded the synopsis makes me think trickster Alfiq khajiit instead of Abyssinian
Is this story actually incomplete?
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If I write one it'll probably be next week in between other commissions.
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Main story: yes
Alternate endings: no.
One ending will show Diamond pursue a relationship with Silver Spoon, the other will show Diamond coming back the same mare she left and utilising her behemoth of a rod in her bullying.
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Thank you. One trend - at least with clopfics - is that Diamond Tiara x Spoiled stuff tends to focus on Diamond getting revenge on Spoiled being a bad mom. I'm sure there's tons of reconciliation stories out there but from the clop it tends to be domination. Whilst there is a little bit of Diamond being forceful, the two ultimately come out of this reconciled and better ponies - if you don't count the incest
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TBH having not actually seen the movie, with my vague knowledge of Abyssinians being cat people and the only example of one tricking the mane 6 I think my brain just defaulted to Khajiit.
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Main story: yes.
Alternate endings: no.
I'm wondering whether or not it'd just be better to mark it as complete at this point.
In the author's box of the final chapter, I gave the reason why it's marked as incomplete.
So to clarify is this pony pony anthro and I’m guessingdimonds over 18
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Yes and yes.
"YOU WERE THERE MOM!"
"Well I wasn't really paying attention."
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It seemed like a really easy joke to make.
This wasa wild heart pumping/warming beginning I can't wait to see where this goes
Reality: "Okay her Mom is secretly 100% horny and the daughter has shades of being a dom, I can work with this."
a very nice story. definitely looking forward to those mentioned alternative endings if / when you produce them.
I can't help but wonder if either alternate ending will result in Diamond Tiara pregnant herself. Whether from her own self or some stallion donor would be interesting to see.
This was a wildly epic chapter I hope Diamond make a herd,so she can 1bang more mares and 2have some baby's.
I hope there's a ending where Diamond make a herd with the CMC,Silver, Bab's and maybe more.
I also hope her dad get some payback and gets her pregnant.
Anyone else think Diti is Discord in disguise?
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Me
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Nah, that is too much out of his character. I rather see he encounter Diti and make a wish for close and understanding family. Only to find himself being changed into a fine mare instead. Spoil unexpectedly find his mare form more sexually appeal than his original body (since Diamond is now more of a stud than he ever was). Then he discover the female pleasure and end up carry Diamond's foal too.
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Then she never get to use he pussy that's boring she needs to have a male partner with equal size,maybe have him grow into her size or have another grow into a equal size so she can be fucked to.
whew lad
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In case you were wondering about the opinion of a total stranger, I'd much prefer the former to the latter.
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That could possibly be a 3rd alternate ending. Although the candidate for impregnator is hard to think of. If I can think of a good way to have DT get preggers I'll write it. Otherwise, thank you for your kind words.
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Initially, I did consider doing this - the biggest giveaway going to be Diti's yellow eyes - but I think it was a little hard to justify.
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I'm a fan of lovey dovey stuff too. The original path for this story was a lot more aggressive but Spoiled's regret scene - which I always intended to include from the start - as well as her apology, made it hard for me to justify Diamond being anything less than a softie in the end. The alternate endings are alluded to with descriptions in the story, such as Diamond's initial appraisal of her cock as well as the small aside to Silver Spoon getting naked in front of her friend. Further expansion on the Silver Spoon thing was cut since the ending was heading towards Diamond x Spoiled anyway, but it essentially amounted to that paragraph being spoken instead, ending with Spoiled shooting her daughter a knowing look due to how obvious it is. Of the two endings I have in mind Silver's will see fruition first.
The only thing I don't like about this story is that it ended.
Holy cow i love this! However, there's a spelling mistake when Diamond first blows her tasty load down Spoiled's throat you spelled esophagus as 'oesophagus'.
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I'm glad you liked it. However, it's not a misspelling. That's just the UK variant. 😅
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Well dang, the more you know!
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Me sitting here having noticed
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Jerry? (my creepy uncle)
Get off ma’s computer!!
Easily one of the best clopfics I've ever read! Well done!
Amazing!