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What a lovely story.
I love Filthyjack.
Good work DTavs exe 👍
I would like to read a sequel of this or maybe another story but with Applejack and Filthy Rich as humans.
Have a nice day ^_^
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I was planning on doing something similar for the EQG world, maybe to save Camp Everfree, I dunno, I'll think about it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the comment.
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I would read that if it had a threeway involving Gloriosa.
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Oh, now that sounds nice, I will seriously consider it.
Great story, different take on the AJ/ Filthy relationship. Enjoyed it, good work!
This was a very interesting read.
Great work.
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Thanks I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and yeah I like this take on FilthyJack, it just worked on my head, since there is a lack of fics with consensual sex from them.
I don't think there's a faster way to lose money short of just throwing it away.
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Yeah, I loved typing every single letter on that paragraph, Spoiled always rubbed me the wrong way, I believe it's the only character in the show I actally
hatewell maybe not hate, just really realy dislike, is just that she doesn't act like a mother should, or at least the only one I can think right now.9833267
She's not the only pony I hate, but the list is short: Spoiled Rich, Svengallop, Suri Polomare.
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At least Svengallop and Suri Polomare got their comeuppance, what boils my blood is that Spoiled pretty much got free easily just with a scolding from Diamond Tiara.
...Is no one going to call out the random grammar issues in this?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Rambling
I remember one of Wodehouse’s novels, someone asks someone else to steal a particular wedding gift of his daughter.
“Won’t the detectives stop me?”
“There won’t be a detective”
“How can you be sure of that?”
“I’ll insist that we have to hire some”
I think “this” should be capitalized
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The like bar should be a good indicator that it's mostly shippers reading this right now and they aren't really gonna complain. Give the fic a bit of time to simmer down and wait for the non-shippers to stick their heads in.
But you are right, this story needs a good thorough proofread.
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Yeah, I know it's far from being perfect and I'm sorry that I didn't get a proofreader, I'm kinda paranoid that everyone is up to get me, so it's kinda hard to ask for help to people I don't know. So how do I get one of them proof readers anyway?
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You ask.
Someone somewhere will say yes.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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I'll do, even if the embarrassment kills me, thanks.
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Hey Thanks, fixed now, I didn't think there would be that many, in fact I thought I fixed like two you mentioned, I guess I forgot to save that, I appreciate you taking the time to help with this, also I don't think I understood the first one, is it the context that is wrong?
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No, just a comment on married life. That’s why it was spoilered
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What happened to them? Svengallop quit of his own accord, and I don't remember if we learn Suri's fate.
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Well he lost his most famous star and sully lost her best assistant and the competition, I believe that's more than what happened to Spoiled.
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I'd rewatched Rarity Takes Manehattan since I posted the comment, and you're quite correct.
I suspect Spoiled has too much influence in Ponyville politics to be properly punished, as the Riches are ludicrously powerful. It reminds me somewhat of that episode of Parks and Recreation (if that's a concept to you) where one of the characters attempts to prevent the destruction of an old building at the hands of the Newports, the main family in the town of Pawnee (where the show is set). However, it proves impossible to get anything done as the Newports control practically everything, from government donations to owning all the town's newspapers.
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Crude reality filling our shows, where the law doesn't apply to you when you have a big wallet.
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It's similar in the UK. The government is too scared of moving against the fat cats because they control business and donations.
Love it.💖
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I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I really do enjoy Filthyjack stories, they are so rare I wish there was more of them.
Thank you for this wonderful read!
Not to mention a major reason her husband is rich.
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Hey you are right, but knowing Spoiled, I bet she disregarded that part of history.
My favorite fanfic of 2019.
I wish you the best DTavs exe
You are not only a great artist but a good writer.
Keep going! 👍
I hope to see more FilthyJack fanfics next year
I love that ship :)
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Hey thanks! I appreciate it, yeah I'm planning to do another FilthyJack fic but can't seem to focus on that right now, since I don't really have that much free time this time of the year, besides all the gaming and my other fic I'm working on.
By the way I'm not that good artist, I can't draw if my life depended on it, I can make so-so edits tho.
Nicely done for your first try. I am eager what else you will do in the future