I kind of want this fic to get a sequel based on this ending.

I'm not sure which ending I want to chose as canon.

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so do i ^^ certainly a surprising plot twist xD

Huh the goey one? With the goey stuff?
Good taste... (the picture.not the stuff)

Ok, this one had me laughing, but I'd say I'll prefer the "canon" ending.

Ending 3: This one's for Shake.

Incest-y.

> only 534 words
"You raised my hopes and dashed them quite expertly sir. Bravo."

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Shining fucked and filled Twilight with cum.

Never realized how easy it was to write a Shining x Twilight incest fic.

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There's very little in this fic that I don't like. Actually, nothing comes to mind. Love the names of the two colts, though I wonder what kind of a life someone called Pool Party would live. Can't be any worse than Party Favour, can it?

I preferred the first ending

*favorites on the premise alone*

I like this one

I loved the ending number one but ending number three leaves so many possibilities.

Definitely ending number one...
Though I'd prefer more comeuppance on Spoiled...
You DEFINITELY manage to portray her as the character you love to hate ^^;;

Let's be real if Shakes wrote this they'd all be related.

And Celestia would be watching from the bush's.

I liked ending One best. Just feels more in line with the story, and Diamond is too mature and observant not to notice what her mom does. Plus, I just love her personality now that she not being a brat.

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Me too, actually!

So I'm guessing there have been several vacation trips to the Zebra lands in the past?

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Frequent flyer miles.

I've read this a few times now. It's sexy each time. Can we get a follow-up with Diamond Tiara and Pool Party?