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Penalt


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It finally happened. Faster-Than-Light Shipping.

5/7 would continue reading. Celestia and Picard, I call it right now.
As huge Star trek fan (and "Thruster" fan), you have my support if you continue this.

Sweet, I'm glad this story is still going further, please make a 4th Sequel soon, I just love how things are going, and it would be SWEET to see Fluttershy or Pinkie or even Rarity get in on this.

7891144 The principle I'm going with for the thruster units going forward is this:

One tribe of pony = straight thrust
Two tribes of ponies = add thrusts together and square the result
Three tribes of ponies = add thrusts together and cube the result.
Add an alicorn?

wooooooooooooshhhhhh

7891160 I see, but I would still like to see how Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie would go about having those Thrust units used on them.

7891228 I'll see what I can do. Although Pinkie Pie might be the very definition of "Hyperactive Hyper Drive."

7891680 I'd sure hate to see her like that, I bet she would unleash a Sonic Pinkboom so large that it could cover all of Equestria in the Color Pink.

:pinkiegasp: OH MY GOSH, THAT'S A GREAT IDEA!

CATCH THAT PINK PONY!............pulls out large butterfly net to try and catch pinkie in it before she get's her hoofs on one of the thrust units

In the words of RA: "and this is why you are 20% awesomer" *gives a Rainbow Apple seal of approval*

7891160 What about stacking four alicorns? :pinkiecrazy:

Good Lord, there's ANOTHER one?!? I have to read this once I'm in private!

Nice story.
Not really a new thruster-model, but an interesting story itself.
(Even if the cover-art doesn't really match...)

And it made me angry. That my story had twisted itself on me and was now becoming a serious story.

Sorry, but I don't get it. What's so bad about this?

Small note: Re-read the first paragraph. You are doubling the moving-thing there.

Sees the "complete" tag aw man...

7896077 All the Thruster stories are written as complete stories. Even if they do share the same context.


7893919 I know what you mean about the art. But it was just too good not to use. :)

7896345
I aimed to imply that there won't be a star trek sequel. Thus the "aw man"

I am with everyone here, that ending calls Star trek. I say we do another story one that shows Star trek and MLP in one big adventure.
I vote another seqal.

I love these Thruster stories!

7898111 As you wish. If only because the idea of Picard and Celestia having tea really makes me smile.

Okay, this is brilliant. And also I, too, wish to see Picard and Celestia having tea.

I-I cannot for the life of me get the picture of Granny Smith with the thruster out of my head. Penalt, what have you done to me!?:raritydespair:

Add all the Alicrons together and what do you get?

Gosh I want to read about this first contact.

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I can agree with that.

*Enterprise warps in*

A few seconds later Data reports "Liftoff detected from the surface. Propulsion source seems to be... magical in origin. Looks like they'll come to us, Captain."

"Well that makes our jobs easier. On screen."

The display lit up with a rather odd image, even for the battle-hardened crew of the Enterprise. A few seconds pass before Riker broke the silence. "... Is that... A pony and a pegasus, flying naked in space, with the exception of a magical rocket strapped to their ass?"

"Actually, sensor readings indicate that the rockets have been inserted into the anal and vaginal cavities. There also appears to be some sort of field maintaining an air bubble around the pair."

"...Thank you for clearing that up for us, Data."

"You're welcome, Commander, though I fail to ascertain the meaning behind your inflection in this situation."

"He was illustrating how ridiculous of a situation this is, and you corrected him stating that the situation was even more ridiculous than first thought," Picard stated absently as he slowly closed on the viewscreen. Even more softly, "I mean seriously, sticking a rocket up your rear end? They're insane. What if it exploded?"

"On our rockets, Captain, the chances of them exploding at any point are astronomically low."

Picard casually faced Data, "Do you really want something that has the potential to explode with enough force to kill you strapped to you? Setting aside that the real equivalent would be mounted inside you."

"...No, Captain."

Picard turns back to the viewscreen, and notices that the ponies are starting to grow a bit large. "Computer, reduce zoom."

"Zoom is at one ex." Confiming this, Applejack and Rainbow Dash ran into the viewscreen window. It was apparent that they were running out of air.

"Have a shuttle escort them to Shuttle Bay Two."

Data chose that moment to pipe up "On the other hand, it doesn't seem so unplausible that this is a similar configuation to the one used to achieve warp speed."

"Nope, I'm done. Come get me when the universe starts making sense again, like if the Borg or another giant death crystal shows up." Councilor Troi left the bridge.

"Oh, believe me, this is a normal day on this planet."

"Q! What is your purpose here?"

Q shifted into Discord, "I live here."

Picard just sat down and brought the palm of his hand to his forehead.

*END SCENE*

I know some of the timings and other things don't make sense like they should, like RD and AJ blasting off right after the Enterprise shows up. But this is more of concept art than a story that should make sense.

Feel free the use anything in this comment wherever, anyone.

Hey, you never let us know if Twilight or Luna and the other princesses won the Hounds and Hare race from the second story. Maybe you can tell us in the 3rd sequel and let us read all the hot details that came out of that, especially if it happened the same time as AJ and Rainbow Dash became a couple and was tearing up the sky with their extreme orgasms.

I do hope a fourth one eventually comes out.

Phew it's over there's no oh no there's more...

“I’ll let you try this out so you can see that it’s for helping AJ fly,” said Rainbow Dash. “I’ve got a spare one over on the bench.”

Oh god no *runs away*:fluttershyouch:

I thought Dash and Twilight were together

“Right, send Picard a message giving him our best idea of the location,” said the commanding voice. “Tell him to prepare for a First Contact situation.”

Picard's face will have a good palm mark after he'll leard about this mode of transportation.

His First will do wall staring.

“All my life, Ah’ve dreamed of flying,” said Applejack. “Not in a balloon or a chariot. Ah mean really fly. Under my own power. Ah can barely imagine of how wonderful it must be for you. Ah see you up there, soaring, without a care, and Ah want some of that sometimes. It’s one of the reasons Ah ride you so hard sometimes. It’s not right of me, Ah know, but sometimes Ah get jealous of you.”

For what it's worth, one cover for issue 81 of the comic (the one featuring the story of the earth pony Wind Sock whose aeronautical experiments got him into the Wonderbolts) features Applejack flying with his invention. Given "Fall Weather Friends" and "Non-Compete Clause", I had always imagined that AJ getting her hooves on something that would let her fly would quickly ignite her competitive streak. Which, it turn, could be the perfect prelude to one of those "lesbian romance is the best medicine" type stories.

Hahahaha can’t stop laughing too funny

Who knew the power of laughter was ten times that of scream?
Oh wait, wrong universe. 😇

But it's oh so extremely satisfying when the clop gallops full on to plot! 😍
Doesn't stop it from being hilarious though.

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