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Ohhhhh~ Looking good.
This better not turn out sad somehow.
I call Changeling!
The conflict between Spike and Shy, is strong in this one.
Shy better not push to hard, but part of me is hoping that if she does, that Spike will push harder!
Great job!
I find myself hoping the end of the story comes with Spike telling princess Celestia off and continues being an agent. Having Spikes pride as an agent and a dragon taunted by Fluttershy is a heavy start.
Picture derpi number?
I am very much intrigued
"Your mission is to infiltrate the Britanian capital of Stafford and gather a certain piece of intelligence. Your cover is going to be the first inter-species married couple to exist in Equestria. As such, there will need to be convincing. Loving kisses, hand holding, dances, convincing back story including wedding day, honey moon location, age of your children, date of your first love making. To get better acquainted with one-another's bodies, you will need to spend the weeks leading up to the assignment sleeping together. Nude. Learn every inch of one anothers' bodies, that way you will know when the other is concealing a weapon under their clothes. I do expect a fully successful mission. You may be required to have sex in front of an audience to prove the validity of your story."
missing a word when talking about pegasus weight.
great story. love the slow burn and description of flutter's physique and the spikes current mental state.
did you intentionally leave out the previous jobs to give ambiguity or thats not part of the story?
this seems like a higher quality story instead of what the title and synopsis entail.
didn't really enjoy this chapter. i felt as lost as spike in this.
from celestia treating her best agent like a worm, flutter testing his fighting ability, and the arbitrary retirement seemed kinda rushed.
That reveal was great. I'm chomping at the bit to get to the mission part!
Thanks man!
This chapter is glorious.
"No Mr. Spike. I expect you to die."
Other than a few grammar errors which some words, this was a great and fun read.
And I'm not sure, but "Count" may need to be capped in this context. Ugh. This is why I don't correct grammar errors. I'm not an editor and it makes me feel like I don't enjoy what I'm reading.
The action reminds me of, 007's missions, when the overzealous women gets him caught.
Favorite part was the talk with the Count.
Looking forward to much more of this story!
...I'm finding myself disliking Fluttershy. Congrats.
Also, how the hell does Fluttershy both know that Twilight was coming with a spy, and work for Luna? Wasn't Luna trapped in the moon for who knows how long?
I'm glad you explained why he's infatuated with her, but it doesn't make me like her any better.
A great read as usual and it ends in such a way I think most would like more tales in this setting with the two of them.
That was a great ending to this story. And Twilight was just plain cute! Great job!
Ha. Drizzles.
Noice~~~~~
Did I already told you about the close relationship of Spike and Smolder?
Lot of missing words, weird perspective errors like "I brought the cup to his lips", and the plot feels kinda muddled.
Huzzah a good story
Clop with plot! the best kind