sejox
Joined 3rd Jul, 2016 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- MoonaKnight13 · 2.3k words · 91 11 · 5.2k views
- B_25 · 4k words · 84 13 · 2.7k views
- Dr Sharaz Jek · 26k words · 1.4k views
- Victoria_the_dragoness · 28k words · 22 3 · 806 views
- nobody495 · 2.4k words · 38 9 · 1.8k views
- CasualFanDontJudge · 26k words · 39 4 · 1.8k views
- CaioCoia · 10k words · 79 2 · 3.5k views
- Hopeful_Ink_Hoof · 6.4k words · 77 4 · 1.7k views
Featured In13
Looking for Editors3,384 stories ·5,412 members
- Spike shipping832 stories ·831 members
- Struggling Authors25,148 stories ·3,670 members
Spike Fanfictions5,586 stories ·2,954 members
My Little Fetish16,574 stories ·8,564 members
- Spike's Many Shippings3,682 stories ·1,732 members
Spike's Basement o' Shame562 stories ·437 members
Stories on Goodreads28,595 stories ·492 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.145 seconds
Total duration
710 users online
1,026,644 hits today, 2,561,572 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Let me know if you can find a good coverArt for this one... I'll try to do it myself but my country's internet service is lamer than a bad written Spike episode.
Catchy acronym!
Should be a great club.
9298628
of course it would be, what could be more wholesome than a group dedicated to study?
9298694
A dragon has a griffin for a wife?
I always felt Fluttershy, was a closet pervert. Either way Spike is pounding some good pussy. I'm always glad to see some love for the little dragon. Awesome story!
9299022
Why would you say thaaaat? She is only a victim of her instinct. Poor Flutershy is an innocent and pure angel who would never do something outside of the wholesome tag
Great story. Loved it.
Quick question: Are you gonna update "A Sidekicks Duty"?
9299639
good question right there, i will need a good amount of time. being honest i have one sequel and a new chapter of another series in my lewd-list that will get released before the next chapter of a sideskick duty
9299753
Thanks. Nice to know.
Overall a good story. Could use an editor/proof reader to give it a quick once over though.
9303842
I have the link to the gdoc, do you think you could help me?
9304168
No problem. Just PM me the link and I'll run through it.
Here are some of the errors I noticed:
drool
cheek
long
releasing
breathed
things
Fluttershy's
drool
thrust
sit
on
Not sure what you meant by compass.
thrusting
his
began
ran?
his tip?
was
cheek
redder
chores
And it may help with the flow if you put something between these two lines to indicate transition. Like "......." or "A few days later", etc.
It was a decent story, but you should give this another read through or perhaps ask someone to proofread it, the errors are bit distracting.
9308017
Thank you!!!
Somethings were lost after using Grammarly, between them, the "drolls" and that last separation at the end you pointed out to be needed.
It's mostly my fault anyway
9308194
you could use that Grammar tool they advertise on YT sometimes
9308194
No problem. There's still a few grammatical and punction errors I didn't point out. Try seeing if you can get someone to proofread after Grammarly has had a crack at it from now on. Can't rely too heavily on softwares. Hope it helps.
Yeah you really don't Spike...you deserve somepony who'll treat you the way you want to
. Fluttershy's the best one
!!!
I JUST GOT THE PUN!!
9821686
LoL