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Lonely Fanboy48


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While the Antidote did helped Twilight feel better from her Spring fever, it caused a side effect transforming her to a baby. Her friends decide to have Zecora make another antidote but it leaves Spike in a situation to keep Twilight occupied. Especially he never took care of babies before.

Thanks to Psalty123 for editing this one shot.
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Especially he never took care of babies before

A Flurry of Emotions

Which episode is the cover art from?

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Actually Princess Twilight was the only character who took care of Flurry Heart. Spike only remind her about the schedule she need to do.

Twilight is inside a baby cage with a table above to pervert her from escaping even with her wings still strapped.

What?

from the moment I saw this short vid I knew this was plot line was going to take off in many great fics and this is one of them. Well made sir.

NOT to be mean or anything but it seems you didn’t see that the mane 6 all got cured from whatever madness Twilight caused.

Comment posted by Strawberry Surprise deleted Mar 7th, 2019
Comment posted by Lonely Fanboy48 deleted Mar 7th, 2019

A neat idea for a little story, and I think you had some good ideas. Unfortunately it just needs some better editing to make for an enjoyable read. For example, you need to use a consistent past-tense rather than using present tense occasionally.

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Thanks for reminding me, I’m just trying to find more editors okay.

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I was taking about this.
b3h2.scene7.com/is/image/BedBathandBeyond/72457112697c?$imagePLP$&wid=256&hei=256
I changed the world cage to gate just to make more sense and the table part was a reference to the Incredibles 2 where bob uses to pervert Jack Jack From leaving. I couldn’t find the right image but this should finally make sense.
writeups.org/wp-content/uploads/Jack-Jack-The-Incredibles-baby-m.jpg
Sorry for the last reply.

Can you do a reading of that please?

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Let me know when it's ready.

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I already watched the video, Lonely and I love it.

Funny story

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