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Equestrian Defender

Fighting for Truth, Justice, and the Equestrian way!


Sunset Shimmer left Equestria through the Mirror Portal when she was ten years old in search of the destiny Celestia sought to deny her. But upon entering the world of Remnant as a Pony Faunus, instead of glory and power she found nothing but darkness, racism, and division. After a string of events caused her to open her eyes and realize the error of her ways, she decides to dedicate her life to protecting those who can't protect themselves, as a Huntress.

Twilight Sparkle wakes up in Remnant as a Pony Faunus after she completes Starswirl the Bearded's unfinished spell and... Honestly she doesn't remember anything after that. After meeting Sunset Shimmer, she discovers that the Mirror Portal Sunset used to get to Remnant won't open for quite some time. But after seeing the situation the people of this world are going through she decides to help them fight the darkness, Grimm and Human alike, and joins Sunset in becoming a Huntress.

Flash Sentry had his life torn apart twice; once when he was five when the Grimm slaughtered his family. The second when the White Fang nearly murdered him for trying to be a hero. They even went so far as to take away his wings and break his spine. Barely surviving and being put back together using experimental technology, he began training himself to fight and become a Huntsman.

Logan Timbers is a Wolf Faunus, a lonely orphan wandering across Remnant looking for his family. This journey has led him across several continents and through several villages that had been ravaged by Grimm. After saving a young girl, an orphan like himself, Logan decides to become a Huntsman so that nobody else has to lose their family. And maybe find his own while he's at it.

All of their paths cross at Beacon Academy in Vale, and together they and two other teams are thrust onto the first part of arguably the greatest adventure they could ever imagine. A journey that shall bring them face to face with darkness the likes of which they have never encountered.

Hopefully they'll survive it.

I do not own My Little Pony or RWBY.

My Little Pony is owned by Hasbro.

RWBY is owned by Rooster Teeth.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 83 )

As someone who is a big fan of RWBY (and Rooster Teeth in general, especially Red vs Blue) I can tell this is going to be an awesome story. Thank you for another winner.

I can see a couple of team name possibilities:

Team Sunset (SSST)
Team Starfall (STFL)

Thank you.
And don't worry, I won't forget to work on my Spiderman story either.

Starfall it is.
Also, I'm a huge fan of your story SAPR. It's awesome!


Starfall it is.

Wow, I wasn't expecting to have got it right!

And thank you, you're too kind.

Great minds think alike.
You're welcome.

Okay, I'll admit. I don't know much about RWBY. I've seen the first episode, read a bit about it. I could follow what was going on here, and it left me with the good kinds of questions, like what's gonna happen next and such. So I'll follow this. Besides, your Spider-Man fic shows you're very good at crossovers. :)

Glad to hear that.
The first five volumes are on YouTube so you can catch up on the series there, just so you can get a good idea of the show itself if you want to.
And thank you.

You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention...

It's fine. But if you change your mind Volumes 1-5 of RWBY are on Youtube.

Ooooooooooo I'm very interested in this plot idea

Nice to see I have your interest. I'll try not to disappoint.

I'm gonna start reading it once I have some free time

Reading the synopsis, I have to say I did not expect a Wolverine Expy in the story. Will you be doing this for any other comic book characters?

We're getting into the SunLight early, I see.


Well they have known each other for Two years now.

Twilight was awesome here! The "You have failed this city!" line never gets old. Kinda funny that her main weapon is a bow and arrow when in canon her human counterpart was awful at archery.
I admit I am not the biggest fan of SunLight, I see them more as sisters than lovers, but it isn't a deal breaker. Though it was still surprising considering in your Spider-Man story you are apparently setting up for FlashLight, but I guess these are technically two different Twilight's.

I spotted only one small typo though:

"Poor sap still kind find his middle finger."

I think you mean "can't".

Whoops, can't believe I missed that one.

And thanks. Yeah Sci-Twi was pretty bad but this ain't Sci-Twi.

So my guess is in close combat, Twilight swings her bow around like a quarterstaff?

Only when she can't transform it back into sword form. But if I've learned one thing from Arrow it's that a bow can be a surprisingly effective melee weapon.

Some badass action, here. And Sunset and Twilight were quite adorable at the end.

I noticed one typo.

Unknown to the duo, a lone figure was falling them from the rooftops. They darted from rooftop to rooftop, making sure to stay close enough not to lose sight of the truck, but far back enough they wouldn't be seen in the truck's mirrors.

I think that's supposed to be 'following'.

Anyway, another great chapter.

Thank you.

Yeah, bow and arrows are almost always badass.

So, Sunlight and Twilight is Hawkeye. I'm on board with this.

So which members of the team are Faunus again?

Flash was awesome here. He took down a tough Grimm all by himself. I can’t wait to see what he can do with the others once they form their team.

They're all Faunus. Flash lost his Eagle Wings in a fight with the White Fang years ago.
Thank you.

Flash, you're a genuine here here. I salute you. :)

Great action, and nice to see a grateful populace rewarding the hero. Flash and Scootaloo, eh? A cool big brother/little sister dynamic here could blossom.

Genuine? You sure you don't mean genius?

And yeah, that's the idea. It'll come into play throughout the story, especially towards the end of Volume 1 throughout Volumes 2 and 3.

I think he meant to say "genuine hero here", but if you are saying Flash is also a genius then that is even better. You like portraying Flash with high intelligence don't you?

Considering how little time we get with Flash in canon, yes.
Unlike with my Spiderman story, this Flash's intelligence is mostly focused in engineering and fighting Grimm. He's not freaky smart, since we already have Twilight and Sunset for that.

Wolverine is here! So good. i really need to go through Sunset and Flash's to see if they fight like someone.

Not really for Sunset, but for Flash I based most of his initial gear off of Falcon from the MCU.

This was an excellent job! A Wolverine expy, that is awesome in so many ways since Wolverine is my 2nd favorite Marvel superhero, guess who is the first. I like the way he fights and how he has such an awesome reputation already, and it is cool how you managed to work in all of his signature powers in various ways. Also, Creed being a Sabretooth expy is awesome too. You can just tell these two are going to be going at it for a long time.

I admit that Blake showing up was a surprise, but a welcome one. Does that mean other canon RWBY characters like the rest of team RWBY or team JNPR could show up eventually? Well, now that the trailers are done I guess next up is "chapter 1" as it were. Good luck!

Considering next up is the first chapter of my new version of Volume 1, yes RWBY and JNPR will show up.
And yeah, Logan and Creed will constantly be at each other's throats.
And I'm gonna guess Spiderman.

Yep, that’s right. Well I can’t wait for the next chapter and the team to officially meet. It will be interesting to see them interacting with canon characters too.

KO awesome chapter, these trailers are awesome and can’t wait to see the adventures our heroes in training will face! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowdetermined2:

Hopefully you guys won't have to wait too long. I just need to finish the latest chapter of my Spiderman story first.

That is fair. I was hoping that story would update soon too.

No we worries. Give me about a week if all goes well.

A Hunter based off Wolverine? Interesting choice!

This was a lot of fun...but I kind of worry that you've gone too over the top too early; not only do these four seem way, way more powerful than either RWBY or JNPR at this point but I'm having a hard time thinking of any villains who could provide a challenge either (Fall Maiden Cinder might be able to take them one at a time, but not as a group).

I'm a little worried about where the tension is going to come from.

A damned fine chapter. So, Wolverine and Sabretooth. Nice. :D Great action. And i loved Logan telling Blake not to hide who she is at the end. he's 100% right, too.

While a few of them did get slashed by his claws there Aura either blocked the worst of it, or the cuts themselves were in non-life threatening areas, usually only deep enough to sever their tendons or muscles so they couldn't move. They wouldn't have to worry about bleeding out.


"You should no better than to try and hide from me, Blake. Once I have your scent I can track you from whole kingdoms away.


Comment posted by Equestrian Defender deleted Jan 11th, 2019

Thank you.

Honestly, I think the only one who could be considered OP is Logan and even then that's a bit of a stretch. I didn't put it in the trailer but his healing has limits depending on his Aura reserves. If you can outlast him and cause continuous damage you can wear his Aura down to the point that his healing slows considerably. He also lacks any sort of ranged weapon so he's at a serious disadvantage when facing long range enemies, especially snipers. And unlike the comic book character he's based off of, he doesn't have metal bonded to his bones, so a headshot can still kill him depending on how bad the damage is (basically a shotgun blast to the head or a high powered sniper rifle to his brain will end him.) Plus there's the fact that when his Semblance is active he might accidentally hurt his own teammate and nearly kill them, so there's that.
As for the other three, they have their own weakness as well, which I'll reveal later on in the story.
But just so I know exactly what you're talking about, how did I make them too powerful?

Thank you.
Who knows, maybe she might take his advice to heart?:raritywink:

Twilight...now that I think about it she isn't really. But Flash can already kill an elder griffon when at the end of volume 3 all the kids had to flee from basic griffons when they attacked the stadium and Sunset feels as though she can solo the powerful grimm that would have required a whole team effort from RWBY at this point in the show.

Technically, Flash only killed the Elder Griffon by outsmarting it. He didn't go head to head like most battles in RWBY. He killed with a combo of brains and luck, not skill or power.
And considering in Canon General Ironwood was able to kill an Alpha Beowulf with just a pistol and some hand to hand, I wouldn't say the Alphas we're that much stronger than typical Beowulves.

It's not like these four are constantly killing Giant Nevermore's or Deathstalkers single handedly. Trust me, come initiation they're going to find they've got a long way to go before they can take on people on Cinder Fall's level.

But as he looked up, he saw that she was gone, as if she had faded away into the night.

He couldn't help but smile. "I can't help but feel this will only be the first time she does that to me."

Twilight can pull a Batman. Now can she do so with consistent results?

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