• Published 24th Nov 2018
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Forbidden Fruits - Shakespearicles



Bright Mac and Pear Butter don't understand why their parents are so opposed to them dating. It seems that there is more to the story than they know.

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Comments ( 106 )

Woah.

Apple Family hickory runs far deeper than any of us expected!

Thank you for the amazing tag.

Accidental incest

Please. P is for Pony is accidental incest.

Oh, you and your incest. :ajsmug:

That is funny, Applebloom used her math skills and figured out that the numbers dont add up. Oh Big Mac and Applejack, you got some explaining to do!

I love the new profile picture!

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Aaaaahhh you broke my heart </3

Grimm will do that to you. It was a privilege to work with him on this collaboration.
He deserves far more followers than he has.

9311796 Thank you. I promote fics all the way.

Comment posted by DeltaXeno1138 deleted Nov 24th, 2018

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As a rule; no.
But feel free to PM me your idea and I'll consider it.
No promises.

I only needed to read the description to get the full implications of this story. I'm going to go cry before reading this. Well done, sir

Always knew the Apples, Pears, and Pies are a kinky family.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

Oh shi--

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It's Happening! The Sex, it's H A P P E N I N G
I'm so scared
and aroused
I'm gonna cry again
why is this happening

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On a semi-unrelated note, this was great, Lord Shake. The clop was great--hell, even the PLOT was great. Wasn't quite what I was expecting, but I've got no complaints. After all, Applecest is WINcest!

9312308 Thank you. Collaborating with Grimm made me really want to raise the bar for myself both in regards to the story and the sex. I'm quite proud of it. Even after going over the outline together, reading his finished portion made me need a cigarette. And I don't even smoke.

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Not that I'm suggesting your prior content was bad--PERISH the thought--but it sure shows. The concept is fairly simple, but the quality and execution of it's content made it an exceptional read. 10/10. 100% Pure Grade. Five Stars.

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Well, if you incest... :eeyup: :heart: :ajsmug: :heart: :applecry:

"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.
Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

I KNEW IT! Also... good fic. Next, Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo's story. Maybe? Yes? Rainbow is Scootaloo's mom? Yesh? Mayhaps? Nu. Ok...

That ending. Mind blown.
Great story overall.

Few things I have to say.
I lost the battle of November (Don't worry, we'll get them next year).

In chapter two, when Granny Smith, talks to Bright Mac about her Uncle and a cow, would it mean that before Braeburn there was another pony that liked to mingle with the buffalos? or it was a literal cow.

I kinda wondered while reading, Granny Smith was called like that because we were introduced to her when she was old, but should it be Gran Smith if she was younger?

I go really curious as to why there wasn't a side story in which we find out what Granny Smith was doing while Bright Mac was with Cherry.

Had to throw in a reference to this as well, huh?
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"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

I rike thing

I would call it a twist ending, but this is Shakespearicles we're talking about. Family trunks are basically the man's specialty.

On a totally unrelated note, I DID commission Journeyman to write a Big Mac/Pear Butter clop... buuuuut considering that guy hasn't been seen since April, I'm guessing if I want that particular itch of Applecest scratched, Imma probably gonna have to do it myself.

Asshole still owes me the thirty fucking dollars he took...

The casual repeated incest.:ajsmug:

"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

Motherfucker (giggity), that better be set up for a sequel. *Looks at author name* Nevermind, that tells me there's a 99.99999999999% chance that'll definitely happen.

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There is a very high probability that that has already happened.

Starting to suspect you like wincest

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I don't think you've read enough of this guys stuff

Who the fuck is Pear Butter???

Why don't I watch the show more???

Do I even need to know who he is to read this?????

Sooooooooo... this is totally canon in liquid pride 2 right ;-)

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Applejack's mom.

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Oh. Is Bright Mac AJ's dad?

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Who the fuck is Pear Butter? Do I even need to know who he is to read this?

he

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Educate yourself, fool !

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But that means watching the show

Ugh

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