Overall, I think the sex between Grand Pear and Granny Smith was hot. However, it was heartbreaking that they just split Bright Mac and Pear Butter like that rather than coming together in some way because of this.
9313895 ...It took me a second, but now I see what Grimm did there. And I fully agree, the wordplay there is FANTASTIC, conveying several different meanings within the pun. ^_^
Hats off to Grimm on this entire chapter. This is the kinda writing that I always treasure. ^_^
A colt and a filly. The colt was yellow furred, bright blue eyes staring up at her under a fiery red mane. The filly was orange, and had taken more after her father, her mane already starting to curl at the ends. Over the last few days since they’d been born she’d spent every moment with them, treasuring every memory she could. And now, as she began to bundle them up tightly in blankets whilst they looked up at her with wide, inquisitive eyes, it was hard to look back at them.
Somehow, some unholy way, you managed to make me have depression strong enough to kill a boner. I didn't think I would ever experience it again after reading the tragedy that is "Emergence" on nhentai, but here we are.
Bravo work so far, really looking forward to finishing this.
Aaaaahhh you broke my heart </3
I came in here expecting hate sex. Got that-- I don't know what I got.
...Dammit, Shake, why the feels?
9312166 Fixed that for you.
Because it's not a clopfic. It's a fic, with clop in it, and it can make you feel more than just horny.
Overall, I think the sex between Grand Pear and Granny Smith was hot.
However, it was heartbreaking that they just split Bright Mac and Pear Butter like that rather than coming together in some way because of this.
I'm sorry, but is NOBODY going to comment on the sheer brilliance in this chapter title's wordplay?
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just found this fic and was gonna mention that title once I was finished, but since you're being so NEEDY...
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Aside from the hot angry sex, this was a tear jerker.
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...It took me a second, but now I see what Grimm did there. And I fully agree, the wordplay there is FANTASTIC, conveying several different meanings within the pun. ^_^
Hats off to Grimm on this entire chapter. This is the kinda writing that I always treasure. ^_^
This is why I save Shakes' fics for some quality undisturbed time. You don't just give us clopfics, you give us goddamned stories.
His eyes are actually GREEN, but okay
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Actually you both get to be mistaken.
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His eyes weren't green until he was older.
Love your attention to detail though. I really do have the smartest fans.
(Fixed with the lesser of two errors.)
Fuck me I've never went from having a boner to crying in one damn chapter before
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Somehow, some unholy way, you managed to make me have depression strong enough to kill a boner. I didn't think I would ever experience it again after reading the tragedy that is "Emergence" on nhentai, but here we are.
Bravo work so far, really looking forward to finishing this.