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Woah.

Apple Family hickory runs far deeper than any of us expected!

Thank you for the amazing tag.

Accidental incest

Please. P is for Pony is accidental incest.

Aaaaahhh you broke my heart </3

I came in here expecting hate sex. Got that-- I don't know what I got. :heart:

That is funny, Applebloom used her math skills and figured out that the numbers dont add up. Oh Big Mac and Applejack, you got some explaining to do!

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Aaaaahhh you broke my heart </3

Grimm will do that to you. It was a privilege to work with him on this collaboration.
He deserves far more followers than he has.

9311796 Thank you. I promote fics all the way.

Comment posted by DeltaXeno1138 deleted Nov 24th, 2018

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As a rule; no.
But feel free to PM me your idea and I'll consider it.
No promises.

They had that magical, star-kissed, other side of a rainbow kind of love

I'm sure you mean star-crossed.

Edit:

A her cutie mark was a pair of

*And

I only needed to read the description to get the full implications of this story. I'm going to go cry before reading this. Well done, sir

Always knew the Apples, Pears, and Pies are a kinky family.

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Huh. I guess I was out-punned!

btw. There were some other errors I saw but didn't have a mind to point out. I know if may be difficult to proof-read whilst sitting on a diamond rod, and I hate doing it as much as any author, but...

Edit: On second thought, maybe that apple just had a really awful accent? I think that's what I chocked it up to when I saw the episode.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

Oh shi--

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It's Happening! The Sex, it's H A P P E N I N G
I'm so scared
and aroused
I'm gonna cry again
why is this happening

...Dammit, Shake, why the feels? :raritydespair:

9312166 Fixed that for you.

...Dammit, Shake Grimm, why the feels?

Because it's not a clopfic. It's a fic, with clop in it, and it can make you feel more than just horny.

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On a semi-unrelated note, this was great, Lord Shake. The clop was great--hell, even the PLOT was great. Wasn't quite what I was expecting, but I've got no complaints. After all, Applecest is WINcest!

9312308 Thank you. Collaborating with Grimm made me really want to raise the bar for myself both in regards to the story and the sex. I'm quite proud of it. Even after going over the outline together, reading his finished portion made me need a cigarette. And I don't even smoke.

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Not that I'm suggesting your prior content was bad--PERISH the thought--but it sure shows. The concept is fairly simple, but the quality and execution of it's content made it an exceptional read. 10/10. 100% Pure Grade. Five Stars.

Overall, I think the sex between Grand Pear and Granny Smith was hot.
However, it was heartbreaking that they just split Bright Mac and Pear Butter like that rather than coming together in some way because of this.

"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.
Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

I KNEW IT! Also... good fic. Next, Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo's story. Maybe? Yes? Rainbow is Scootaloo's mom? Yesh? Mayhaps? Nu. Ok...

Liked how you mixed the Perfect Pear into this chapter. Really worked here.
Also, Granny Smith was a real scumbag in this; so was Grand Pear but that was already know in most cases. I liked how Bright Mac stood up to her like that and was willing to leave with Pear Butter if she didn't accept them.

That ending. Mind blown.
Great story overall.

Few things I have to say.
I lost the battle of November (Don't worry, we'll get them next year).

In chapter two, when Granny Smith, talks to Bright Mac about her Uncle and a cow, would it mean that before Braeburn there was another pony that liked to mingle with the buffalos? or it was a literal cow.

I kinda wondered while reading, Granny Smith was called like that because we were introduced to her when she was old, but should it be Gran Smith if she was younger?

I go really curious as to why there wasn't a side story in which we find out what Granny Smith was doing while Bright Mac was with Cherry.

"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

I rike thing

I would call it a twist ending, but this is Shakespearicles we're talking about. Family trunks are basically the man's specialty.

On a totally unrelated note, I DID commission Journeyman to write a Big Mac/Pear Butter clop... buuuuut considering that guy hasn't been seen since April, I'm guessing if I want that particular itch of Applecest scratched, Imma probably gonna have to do it myself.

Asshole still owes me the thirty fucking dollars he took...

The casual repeated incest.:ajsmug:

"Hey, wait a minute," Applebloom said. "It says they died twenty years ago, but I'm not even twenty years old myself. How is that even possible?" she asked.

Applejack and Big Macintosh exchanged nervous glances.

Motherfucker (giggity), that better be set up for a sequel. *Looks at author name* Nevermind, that tells me there's a 99.99999999999% chance that'll definitely happen.

"I would ask if you at least managed to sleep well..." Granny said to Buttercup before glaring at Bright Mac's stupid grin. "But that expression tells me that somepony had too much fun on their wedding night."

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You quoting that one comic?

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There is a very high probability that that has already happened.

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Um...No?
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Also, you're late to the What's That Reference? game 9312941 But thank you for playing.

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