They had that magical, star-kissed, other side of a rainbow kind of love

I'm sure you mean star-crossed.

Edit:

A her cutie mark was a pair of

*And

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It's a direct quotation.

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Huh. I guess I was out-punned!

btw. There were some other errors I saw but didn't have a mind to point out. I know if may be difficult to proof-read whilst sitting on a diamond rod, and I hate doing it as much as any author, but...

Edit: On second thought, maybe that apple just had a really awful accent? I think that's what I chocked it up to when I saw the episode.

Liked how you mixed the Perfect Pear into this chapter. Really worked here.
Also, Granny Smith was a real scumbag in this; so was Grand Pear but that was already know in most cases. I liked how Bright Mac stood up to her like that and was willing to leave with Pear Butter if she didn't accept them.

"I would ask if you at least managed to sleep well..." Granny said to Buttercup before glaring at Bright Mac's stupid grin. "But that expression tells me that somepony had too much fun on their wedding night."

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You quoting that one comic?

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Um...No?
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Also, you're late to the What's That Reference? game 9312941 But thank you for playing.

Damn

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And this is no fairy tail.

tale (unless you wanted the pun?)

Each day mad it easier and easier

made

By the sound's of

sounds

Granny hear the clatter

heard

9313850 Fixed. Thank you.

Well that was quite the dramatic and romantic chapter.... Loved it!

. She reached under them and guided him with her hoof. Between her copious wetness and hid dripping precum, he slipped right up along her marehood into place, poised at her entrance.

His

he wrapped his hooves around her thighs and pulled himself into her loins. Buttercups back arched and her mouth was agape in so sharp an inhale that it was like an inward scream.

Buttercup’s

When he withdrew next, she wan't bereft. Knew knew it would return.

She knew

Buttercup gasped. Her friend, Chiffon Swirl was there, along with Mayor Mare and Brunt Oak.

I might be wrong, but wasn’t the guy’s name burnt oak?

"I don't want to be apart from you, ever," Bright Mac said. "I'm not sure what we'll do, but I'm sure of us. So surethat I'd marry you today."

Missing space after the end of the italicization

The combined might of both of their families couldn't drag them apart. He dared them. He defied them to try!

Dared? I might just be dumb on this one...

This was such a sweet story, and adds substance to Bright Mac and Buttercup’s relationship that was missing from the episode.

9323953 Fixed.
Thank you.

Mmmmmmm... Right in the best of her. I knew there was a reason I liked you, Shakes.

Still, needs more gooey goodness. Too many feels.

Grand Pear had special blankets made for his trees so the wouldn't get cold

*they

What has started as an act of rebellious defiance, turned into a compelling curiosity regarding the other.

What's with the tense change?

He twitched and then sneezed, sending the flowers flying. Most of which landed in her mane.

The second sentence is some kinda premature part that will not survive without being incubated to form a full sentence (I ain't familiar with the technical term)

And her scent! all those hugs and times with her leaning on his shoulder

*All

Her hoof moved on it's own

*its

But It was nothing compared to this.

*it

His oral ministrations has taken her to a pinnacle of pleasure

*had

She had come down from that peak somewhat since she had cum

The past tense form is "cummed"

just slightly parting tiny entrance to her womb

I am thinkin' this needs a "the"

wilting his erection until is pulled free with an audible 'plop'

*it

Other's sat on the block of ice in the cellar.

*Others

It's wouldn't be easy on either of them

*It

9574935 Welcome back.
Thanks for the help!

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I am glad to help. Thanks for the fic with clop in it

"I would ask if you at least managed to sleep well..." Granny said to Buttercup before glaring at Bright Mac's stupid grin. "But that expression tells me that somepony had too much fun on their wedding night."
Nice reference to https://derpicdn.net/img/view/2018/1/23/1639275.jpeg

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