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Princess Twilight Sparkle is celebrating her first Gala without her friends, though her first-friend ever makes a sudden return...


A Spilight I'd written on New-Years.

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Comments ( 40 )

Yes! Best ship returns!

Damn so much set up in just the first chapter! This is super interesting.

This chapter evoked a lot of emotions from me. You captured the dialogue well, and I think the scene with Twilight convincing the Wonderbolt to ask out the mare stood out to be as very realistic.

Good job, buddy.

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YOU FUCK.

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Glad you folks like it.

Wrote it some time ago and just forgot about it.

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Super sadface

Can't wait for those two to snuggle :rainbowkiss:

Asp the rest of the elements dieded and spike was banished/super big? Have a sneaky sus the two are somehow related...

The excitement is killing me!:pinkiehappy:

Got an idea of what happened, but would rather read your work! Great start, waiting for more!:moustache:

HHMMMMMMMMMMM a Spilight story huh?

Please, continue :moustache:

Something must've happened that caused all this to happen, right?

:moustache: No I'm not going on another rampage
:twilightangry2: You better not!
:moustache: Well what would you do? I got hit with a lot of paternity suits
:twilightangry2: That was a rampage I'd rather forget
:moustache: That rampage wasn't so bad they wanted more, Why the banishment?
:twilightoops: You didn't rampage me! Now lets go meet your foals
:rainbowderp::applejackconfused::derpytongue2::fluttercry::raritystarry::pinkiegasp::trixieshiftright::unsuresweetie::applecry::scootangel:
:moustache: gosh they look like their mothers:facehoof:

You never fail to deliver a solid, emotional read. You built up quite the tension prior to ending the chapter. I so want to know what happened and how things will go. It just seems I'll have to wait.

Well done! :)

Sweetie Belle squinting to the side in a cautious manner.

I'm guessing Spike is somehow involved in the deaths of Twilight's friends. I could be wrong though.

"A spell that inflicts mustaches?" the creature said, his voice deep but his tone playful. "Is that really the punishment you give nowadays?"

Hee! :moustache:

Lessee now... Twilight trying not to be wrecked over her friends being RIP, Spike being a Mighty Dragon of Mystery, and no sign thus far of the other princesses...

So much to read into the empty spaces! Oh, yes. I am so following this. :twilightsmile:

:pinkiegasp: An emotional cliffhanger! I say, this is cruel and unusual punishment! I beg thee, provide me with more chapters, and thus heal me of this gaping want! :fluttershysad:

Edit from March 2019: Also, why did Twilight send Spike away?

P.S. I know this was cancelled, but still, it has so much potential...

it's a bit homo but it's nice

As always I here to read your story .

great start, I cant wait for more!

Why is Spike unwelcome?!?! He's Twilight's most loyal and best friend!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

Did you make the cover art?

i like that banter it was funny

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If only I had such talent—the strokes of my pen set paper on fire.

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I could do a cover art but I'd need to know what you wanted it to look like.

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I wasn't expecting such an offer to ever happen--whatever you think would look good will suffice.

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I have a knack for good timing and I like this little story so ill see what I can work with give me a month and I'll have something for you.:twilightsmile:

really set the melancholic mood for this story pretty well, has potential, will keep an eye on this one

Oooohh this story seems to have alot of potential I'll be looking forward to see another romance between twilight and spike.

I'm Still waiting...

Interesting. Wonder how much damage had to be done for her to send him away.

more please

Why hasn't this continued yet?!:flutterrage:

This cold have bin a great story... :pinkiesad2:

Hey B why didn't you continue this? It had such a great start

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