Spike is Twilight's number one assistant, and he does that job with pride. He cleans the library, cooks her meals, and manages the finances.
However, Twilight has never been very sensible with money, and her income as a librarian is meager. To help out, sometimes Spike does jobs for Celestia.
Jobs that some ponies might be appalled by.
A short story that I had the idea for and wrote in a single day.
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Very interesting. Though I have to say, I don't particularly like the implied Tyrant Celestia.
406355 To be honest, I don't usually like tyrant Celestia either. I don't think it matches the character we're shown in the show.
That said, this is a sort of dark-side fic. Tyrant Celestia, a silly spoiled Twilight that is completely oblivious to her assistant being an assassin, and a morally flexible Spike.
are there going to be more chapters to this story?
406601 Not for the moment at least, I've got a few other stories I'm working on. However, I do have some ideas for where to go with this, so it's certainly not impossible.
This is a pretty damned good story, very well written. I really like the premise too, it's a pretty interesting concept.
This is one of the most interesting story premises I've seen on this site. For some reason I just love the idea of Spike as a secret assassin... the whole idea somehow makes sense to me...
Also this has a lot of potential to go from here. Really hope you someday decide to continue this setting. Twilight finding out, Spike starting to question the morality of his job, and so on. Come what may, this still goes in my favorites 
Oh, excellent. Him questioning this is a bit abrupt, but that's my only problem with this; it's somewhat minor since that's a means by which you are initiating a major change and the next chapter wholly depends on it, but that's still something I noticed.
If you update like I do I'll see you in a few months and thoroughly enjoy every words.
Later
~Lord Doxkid~Holy crap, that escalated quickly!
Oh. Completed? I was hoping it would go deeper into this situation... But anyway I enjoyed it.
2235851 For now at least. This was actually originally going to be a one-shot, but I couldn't stop myself from coming back. So if a) I figure out where to go with it and b) people want to see that, there's a good chance there will be more.
I just didn't want to leave it on "On-hiatus" and mislead people into thinking another part was guaranteed. ...Like I did for the last couple months.
Wonderful.
Knew it was Luna.
406355
Same here. If Celestia were kill another pony like that, she would need a pretty good rock solid reason for doing so and a pony speaking out against her wouldn't be one of them.
wonder what would happen if twilight found out somehow
Interesting. It's based on MLP, and it's a fictional tale, but I don't think the term "Fan Fiction" suits it. "Satire," perhaps. Or "Parody." Something written by an enemy rather than a fan.
Still, I'll leave the up/down thumbs alone.
Wow...intense...
A sequal maybe?
Damn, those Princesses are scary!
It's too spooky!
I would like more please.
i hope for a sequel these are very rare to find
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