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What a lewd pirate captain.

Comment posted by Admiral Q Ponyform deleted Nov 16th, 2017

This was a nice read.

Well written!

I was settled in to enjoy a little roleplay action when you took an excessive and inordinate amount of time to breathlessly rhapsodize over the stench and filth. It's decently written and the concept is nicely constructed but it has an all-pervasive filth that ruins it and should be included in the tags. Stench and slovenlyness are fetishes for whatever reason and should be noted as a warning for others.

Is there such a thing as Consensual Non-Con? Like, I know what you're trying to get at, but surely there has to be a better term for that. Dub-Con, maybe?

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Dubious consent implies that it's not ever clear--CNC is very explicitly clear that its consensual agreement to enter into a situation.

This one was awesome, Silent!

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Silent did offer "rapeplay" as an alternative description of the same thing. "Consensual non-con" is just an often-seen term for that, logic be damned.

"Dub-con" wouldn't be a good word for it; that already has an established meaning of "actual non-con where the author thinks they have found a way to pretend it's not".

(Which, speaking as someone whose first piece of clop was dubcon, I say in the least judgemental way possible).

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As long as other people get what it means, it's good. It was a interesting read nonetheless.

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On one hand, yes.

But on the other, pirates in general are usually portrayed as pretty fucking gross by default. This combined with Rarity's penchant for cleanliness leaves filthiness to be expected in this situation.

Okay, that was amazing. Short, but sexy, and amazing!

Sons of Beaches... awesome. And Rarity letting them filthy the place up just to add to things, very nice touch.

Though can tell this was written by some landlubber with no idea what they were doing. You called the decks 'floors'. :derpytongue2:

But yeah another really fun, sexy little fic.

I'm starting to think this fic would prolly be in a scene from one of Rarity's romance novels. Geez, what's with Equestria and romance novels!?

A fun little fic! I've always thought that Rarity has a thing for roleplaying in the bedroom, especially if it makes use of the wide variety of costumes she has at her disposal!. :raritywink:

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