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Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

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Awesome mate! You done good, my friend.

You know there's a way to make it so the people who favourited the first one will be notified that there is a sequel, right? What you do is go to the URL of the first one, look for a set of numbers in it, grab it, then go back this one, and put it in the prequel ID of the story creator.


The source is there

hmmm this story is interesting


Have you read the prequel?

Why do I get the feeling one of these will be what he plays?


gonna be fair, I never watched Steven Universe, but I like that 2nd video's song tho


D'awwwww~ I love that video :rainbowkiss:

but no, it's not even that.

It's gonna be instrumental and it's from a certain series, but that will be all I can reveal.

As good as it is to see a sequel, you need to go back and check your grammar

"Take car, buddy,"

"Like I said a year ago Button, 'it's normal for a mother to embarrass her son',"

"Oh cool," said Scootaloo, "it's been a while since I've seen here."

Well you can see 'here' right now. Unless you meant her. :P

Thanks for spotting that

Yaaaaaassss M8

Unexpected but not unwelcome.

I'm not entirely sure whether I should read this story or not considering my thoughts on the prequel, but for now I'll just put it under my Read Later library just in case.

If I do decide to pick this up, I hope there'll be some improvements.

Damn this was quick but I'm okay with it :pinkiehappy:

If Button Ever Finds Out, He's Gonna Be Like.

I see the future, and I see the most awkward story I have ever read/will read. But its good. I would like it if Jared was a bit more polite, and not so juvenile, but hey, it will be ok either way.

7019263 Or like this nerd

7025304 WHAT? You can't imagine Button like the dude at the end with the baseball bat?

True, but that won't be the song for the next chapter

7025337 No no no wasn't suggesting it as a song to go with a reading or something, just an amusing side thought. I have a slanted sense of humour, evil Pinkie kind. Sorry for any offense, I shall kneel before Zodd!!


yea you should make third of this

The ONLY reason there should be a sequel is to see Button's reaction when he sees/hears this

You should make a story about what happens after this

Yeah, this was pretty bland for me like the last one. It's like you relied on the music and images linked instead of using your own descriptions to forward the story, and I call that lazy writing.

The clop... Still as awkward as the last one. I cringed at the "dinner, bath, or me" manga/anime trope, but I just stopped right up to I saw "rerorero" again. I'm not even going to look at the third fic if it comes out. Thumbs down, just wasn't good for me.

Nice sequel, best of luck to those love birds

As much as I like this story, it was really hard to read with all the video links breaking the story up. They take up a lot of space, and I got confused and a little uninterested whenever one appeared. It also felt like you were relying on them to tell the story instead of writing a description of what was going on.

i lost it at hot man milk

We needs MOAR! pls? :pinkiehappy:

SO HOT STUFF (i haven't readed it yet :$ )

0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0 0.0

Another one hopefully and if yes then I can't wait to read it

That's gonna be interesting

@zoddtheimmortalone Greatest thing I've read so far and I've read a lot so that's saying something. Hopefully there will be a threequel ,that would be great

Nice Halo reference with the time :P

"You two must be thirsty after going in and out of the house, load after load,"

:rainbowwild: That's what she said.

Reaction to Button &Sweetie Belle leaving:
Mostly, its just the WTF part.

My son's grown up so fast!
I concur :ajsmug:

I'd hate to be a bother here, but I would really like another story, that is if it is possible. Both of these stories were great, except for a few things but you'll get something about that moments time, but overall for the first story 4.5/5 and for this one 4.5/5 coming to a total of 9/10 from me, good job

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