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Oldtakufanboy


Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

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Jacob was a sad 19 year old boy who had a crummy life with his adoptive parents that don't care that much about him, but themselves. At times, he wanted to end his life, but he didn't have the guts to kill himself. One night however, he saw a shooting star and made a wish.

His wish came true... sorta.

He wakes up in the form of a werewolf and ends up saving the life of a pegasus who treats him as if he was a normal person. Could this world be better than the one he lived in when he was human?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 54 )

Cool concept. Will follow with interest.

this is really good I can't wait for the next chapter

Really interesting, I'll keep an eye on this one.
Good job.

I have no problem at all that there was no ponys at all. This is the first chapter so more or less it has to be about the main guy/girl, so if it was all about him I good with that.:twilightsmile: So this was a great first chapter, this will be great.

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Hope you like the rest of it :raritywink:

Nice looks really good.

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my girlfriend start to this and she loving this so far great work

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Tell her I said your welcome :twilightsmile:

Your comment made my day :pinkiesmile:

Question with the mare on the moon still up, and that Twilight is in ponyvillie and everyone is an Elements of harmony already? So is Luna still Nighmare moon waiting to come back or am I off here.:unsuresweetie:

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No, Luna isn't nightmare moon, but… did the moon always stayed like that? Even after nightmare moon was gone? :rainbowhuh:

6885378 I don't know for sure. But form what I think when Luna came back the mare on the moon was gone. I think the mare on the moon was to mean that somepony is trapped up there. I think.:rainbowderp: But now I know that Luna is normal, it is ok, no more confuse:derpyderp1: for now.:derpytongue2:

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oh, phew. If I messed something up, then I'll go back and edit that part.

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Thanks for your opinion. If I messed something up, then I'll edit that part of the chapter.

This is a clever idea. Could use s little work and be a small but slower paced but it's very good I'll read the next chapters for sure

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I'll work on the next chapter as soon as I can

This is a really good chapter and I would like to read the next chapter as soon as possible

..... not sure if edgy main character.


Will give try anyway.

Please update dude. Some of the other chapters were funny as hell!

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Sorry if it's been a while, but I've been busy

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Sorry if I haven't been updating on this story. I'm stuck on what to write next

Hmm have pinkie throw a welcome to equestria party or introduce the villain of the story? Also cute story start keep it up

Comment posted by Hidemain deleted Nov 4th, 2016

Ok kamahameha wave seriously? :trixieshiftright::rainbowhuh::scootangel:

Is it just me or does it seem that he's going to be with fluttershy in this?

Whut the h*** is inuasha doing here?! :pinkiegasp:
Begon half demon be gone!!!
ps. I like you inuasha i just dont like mixing my animas.

Hey all he needs now is tetsiga

If you need someone to bounce ideas with let me know I love this concept

Then suddenly fang is transported to a silver mine!:trollestia:

I like it so far keep up the good work bud

Good job I loved this chapter then again I have loved evry chapter so far???

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I know it's been a while, but I have no idea on how to continue the story. I might as well leave it on hiatus

Well you can start by pinki trow him party

could use a revision there are a lot of grammar errors

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I’m aware. This came out when I was beginning to write stories.

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That is understandable I wasn’t complaining about it, I have in fact read worse

"They died…by a car accident injuries when I was eight."

No replies; only silence. I then felt Fluttershy lay her head against my back and could feel her hoof patting my back.

"You poor soul," she said in a sad tone, "your parents are gone."

Why in the world is Nopony questioning what he means by a car accident? They are ponies... are they not?

im confused, is he just a large white wolf who can change into a humanoid form or is he already a wolf thats in a humanoid form, because it talks about him “running on all fours” then to him having fingers and arms

"No wonder it tastes so good," I said, as I wolfed down the rest of the drink.

hahaha...i see what u did there, its very..... *puntastic*

I thought he was going to say Jäger for a sec there... it really suits him

Couldn't use some grammatical work, but this is fucking awesome!

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he “wolfed” it down when he IS a wolf

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