Third?

yea you should make third of this

The ONLY reason there should be a sequel is to see Button's reaction when he sees/hears this

You should make a story about what happens after this

THIRD!!!!

Yeah, this was pretty bland for me like the last one. It's like you relied on the music and images linked instead of using your own descriptions to forward the story, and I call that lazy writing.

The clop... Still as awkward as the last one. I cringed at the "dinner, bath, or me" manga/anime trope, but I just stopped right up to I saw "rerorero" again. I'm not even going to look at the third fic if it comes out. Thumbs down, just wasn't good for me.

Nice sequel, best of luck to those love birds

Threequel!

As much as I like this story, it was really hard to read with all the video links breaking the story up. They take up a lot of space, and I got confused and a little uninterested whenever one appeared. It also felt like you were relying on them to tell the story instead of writing a description of what was going on.

i lost it at hot man milk

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We needs MOAR! pls?

SO HOT STUFF (i haven't readed it yet :$ )

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Another one hopefully and if yes then I can't wait to read it

That's gonna be interesting

@zoddtheimmortalone Greatest thing I've read so far and I've read a lot so that's saying something. Hopefully there will be a threequel ,that would be great

Reaction to Button &Sweetie Belle leaving:
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=wE3rGWibaXE
Mostly, its just the WTF part.

My son's grown up so fast!
I concur

I'd hate to be a bother here, but I would really like another story, that is if it is possible. Both of these stories were great, except for a few things but you'll get something about that moments time, but overall for the first story 4.5/5 and for this one 4.5/5 coming to a total of 9/10 from me, good job

THREEQUEL!!!!

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If it's bad than the first one than why the fuck are you reading this one?
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more sexy time with milfs!

I'm not going to bother with trying to correct porn dialogue since all this was intended to be was spank material...but God damn those hyperlinks and youtube videos everywhere. I don't want to click on those links to see Jojo stuff and youtube videos to TV shows or movies that I've had no interest in and get diverted to a YouTube video on another page.

Sorry. Hyperlinks and videos in written works just piss me off

U made Aj gay 🖕