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Oldtakufanboy


Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG

Comments ( 24 )

Very concise, simple without being overblown but meaty enough not to be pure clop.

"J-Jake," she said, as her face gets ever so red, "I…l-l-like you."

Was a compliment insofar as basic standards go.

The four inch cock, unheard of in a doc that's not comedy. Interesting

As this was a quick read that was mostly composed of clop, it was still pretty nice.
You get a thumbs up from Neil Patrick Harris!
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It's like it was written by a child. I'm sorry, I couldn't even read past the first few paragraphs. It was an unstructured mess, when making dialogue try getting into the habit of telling the reader who is talking.

This was below High school level in writing. The positive comments are being with very low standards. I suggest getting a beta because as the other reviewer said this is writing you expect from a child.

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Yeah you really shouldn't be one to rag on someone who writes below High School level or those who might enjoy it. You've stayed at that level for 4-5 years now. Since FanFiction.net which had many cringe worthy stories that you wrote, more so when you tried to steal ideas from me and a friend and called you out on it and then you removed the chapter after many caught on to it.

This was hot and sexy. Have a fav.:pinkiehappy:

This story was mildly hilarious. I'm giving you a thumbs down because I was left with an unsatisfied boner. Vote for Hillary Trump 2024.

Things were okay

Until he said he had a four inch dick

I laughed so hard and I'm reading through my phone during my lunch break, co-workers asking what's funny, I had to switch to youtube :rainbowlaugh:

How did I know you were going to use that quote from Lucky Star??

Great Anime too.

If anyone hasn't seen it I suggest you do, its funny as hell.

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I totally agree, the only anime the can get away with talking about food for an entire episode

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place it gently in the fireplace and then got the fire going by lighting a piece of paper beneath to get it started. I walk back to Derpy, who still continued to shiver.

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Oh yeah, Kirby had an anime.. where most of the episodes where food related.

8142997 The funny thing is, that me and my three other friends are hard core kirby fans and out of all of us the only pegasister in our kirby group (aka me) was the only one that knew kirby had an anime and watched it when I was younger.

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I also watched it too when it was free on the wii for a short while, my favourite episode had to of been the one with the robotic dog, right in the feels. :fluttershysad:

8147930 But it was funny when dedede exploded in that episode
And the dog has a name but I forgot it...
One of my favorite episodes is when escargoon tricks dedede with fake ghosts and customer service send in a real ghost to collect payment for n.m.e.

8147930 actually I remember watching the anime when it first came out as well

Eh...it was ok. Not much meat on them bones.

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