Awesome mate! You done good, my friend.

You know there's a way to make it so the people who favourited the first one will be notified that there is a sequel, right? What you do is go to the URL of the first one, look for a set of numbers in it, grab it, then go back this one, and put it in the prequel ID of the story creator.

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I'll do that

WOOHOO SEQUEL

C-cover art?

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The source is there

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shit sorry lol

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no prob

hmmm this story is interesting

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Have you read the prequel?

Why do I get the feeling one of these will be what he plays?

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gonna be fair, I never watched Steven Universe, but I like that 2nd video's song tho

7012642 How about this one then?

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D'awwwww~ I love that video

but no, it's not even that.

It's gonna be instrumental and it's from a certain series, but that will be all I can reveal.

As good as it is to see a sequel, you need to go back and check your grammar

"Take car, buddy,"

"Like I said a year ago Button, 'it's normal for a mother to embarrass her son',"

"Oh cool," said Scootaloo, "it's been a while since I've seen here."

Well you can see 'here' right now. Unless you meant her. :P

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Thanks for spotting that

Yaaaaaassss M8

Unexpected but not unwelcome.

I'm not entirely sure whether I should read this story or not considering my thoughts on the prequel, but for now I'll just put it under my Read Later library just in case.

If I do decide to pick this up, I hope there'll be some improvements.

Damn this was quick but I'm okay with it

If Button Ever Finds Out, He's Gonna Be Like.

I see the future, and I see the most awkward story I have ever read/will read. But its good. I would like it if Jared was a bit more polite, and not so juvenile, but hey, it will be ok either way.

7019263 Or like this nerd

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Nope

7025304 WHAT? You can't imagine Button like the dude at the end with the baseball bat?

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True, but that won't be the song for the next chapter

7025337 No no no wasn't suggesting it as a song to go with a reading or something, just an amusing side thought. I have a slanted sense of humour, evil Pinkie kind. Sorry for any offense, I shall kneel before Zodd!!

SEQUEL!!!11!!!1!1!!!!

Nice Halo reference with the time :P

"You two must be thirsty after going in and out of the house, load after load,"

That's what she said.

Yep, still as painful to read as the first one...

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7846767 MeeM

7012314 MmmmmmmmmmashhsammmmmmmmmM

"Scoots, stop saying, 'bromance'," retorted Button, "it sounds gay."

And there’s something wrong with that?

"Miss Mash, the girls and I hung out around the house for a while, till Rarity had to leave to check on the boutique and her cat Opal. The three girls left for home. Finally, it was only Elaina and I."
If Sweetie Belle left with Button Mash in the car, shouldn't it be only Scootaloo and Applebloom to leave?