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LilSlipsy


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You better watch out
You better not cry
Better not fap
I'm telling you why
Santa Claus is cumming to town!

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He see's you when you're sleeping.

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He knows when you're awake. *Cue tent rising up in blanket*

He likes when you've been bad tonight.
So be bad for goodness sake!

This story was great! :twilightsmile:

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Awwww.... This Guy ruined the song!

This was quite fun to read, although it felt like there was no rhythm. It was hard to follow the correct tune while constantly bumbling from verse to verse.
Not to say I didn't indulge, of course, for there's no better fun than that with a horse. 10-/-12 syllables. Wish I found this around December; it probably would've put me in the Christmas Spirit.

This was quite a good piece of pony smut, each filly felt it in her horny gut. As they did learn a valuable lesson, whether they sin again remains in question. They did enjoy their punishment so well, maybe they'll want to repeat it, only time will tell. Either way, the fillies learned such horrid activities, the next day, they engaged in their naughty festivities. From now, the only way for the three to ever to feel whole, was to gather much pleasure from their sinful little holes.


Also, this small tip from me to you: this story could use just a bit more of Scootaloo. Though reading this story is not something I regret, I feel that filly had a bit of neglect.

The mare’s rump pushed right back and started to ground, until finally she squeaked with a pleasurable sound.

"The mare's rump pushed right back and started to grind, in anticipation of the pleasure she'd find." makes more grammatical sense.

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