• Member Since 22nd Dec, 2017
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LilSlipsy


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okay seriously thats super good! 10/10! the only issue (and its super minor) is the occasional grammar mistake, but really there is WAY too much good in here for4 me to focus on that!

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Thanks a lot for that! And if you do see anything that needs fixing, just pm me and I can get it done right away. Already go over it 3 times and have a few people look at it before it's published, yet those lil mistakes still pop through lol. :twilightblush:

(NSFW: 2141495) didn't show any image or act as a clickable hidden image or link.

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It shouldn't. Posting or linking to NSFW images is against FimFic's terms of service, however, I can post a number as a hint for others to search it themselves.

This had to be the craziest chapter story I have ever seen. It must have been too much fir Flurry and Pumpkin. 20/10 for this!

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