Where's The Love Big Bro?

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Starlight Nova

Starlight Nova #1 · Nov 29th, 2016 · · ·

Butterscotch is one word. Also, why does Zephyria look like Princess Celestia?

Lunasservant1985

Lunasservant1985 #2 · Nov 29th, 2016 · · ·

7756240 it really was the only rule 63 image of zepher i can find

Utopianking

Utopianking #3 · Nov 29th, 2016 · 2 · 1 ·

That was... disappointing. The sex scene was really short and almost out of nowhere and felt like you spent to much time going into Zephyria becoming a prostitute. While her plan certainly sounds like something Zephyr would do, I think it and the clop should belong in two different stories. But that's just my opinion.

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Violet Rose in The Rain

Violet Rose in The Rain #5 · Nov 29th, 2016 · 1 · ·

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the clop wasnt intended to be the major focus here the comedy and characterization was.

The characterisation was near-absent, and the comedy is laughable, and not in a good way.

and his animals, his closest companions.

From the used makeup tissues and "femmine hygiene."

'Oh sweet Celestia please don't let it be...I'll take a break in and let them take what they want...even my plot virginity...

What.

it's the secret that's gonna make you're little sis a rich mare."

She zipped up her bag of ill gotten illicit goodies

It was implied that she bought it from a flea market from a couple. Where was it stated that she stole it?

to business but that i'll cost em extra.

TIL that simply getting down and fucking costs more than a date and the pre-packaged sex combined.

Hell might even offer to invite some over to do three ways or four ways for the real big bucks...

Do no allow your concentration to break, subjects have been known to lose their mental state in the trance!

Just...get an editor. I'd volunteer, but I have neither the time nor the energy.

RealClassixX

RealClassixX #6 · Dec 11th, 2016 · · ·

In every fading rainbow, high above trees, below the moon and sun.

jjrock7H

jjrock7H #7 · Jan 29th, 2017 · · ·

He then took a bundle of bungee cords and in what must have been record time; untangled them,

five hours is indeed a pretty good record.

Warlord1911D1

Warlord1911D1 #8 · Feb 5th, 2017 · · ·

Pretty goof frickin story.

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