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Omegathyst


Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)

Comments ( 10 )

Nicely done. A tad sad, but well written.

i was just gonna let this story rot in it's own inferiority, but then i saw this:

cheating w/superior partner

you're just trying to piss me off here, aren't you

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I'm not sure what you mean? That was the specific prompt that the recipient for the Summer Sin 2021 story exchange asked for: cheating with a superior other partner.

Comment posted by Late_Night deleted Jul 24th, 2021

Insults towards me as a person will not be tolerated in the comments.

The uncertainty and tension Sandbar feels in the first half of the story is the heart and strength of this story. I can appreciate that he and Gallus wasted no time getting physical after meeting again, though part of me wishes they had had a little more time to pine and reflect and lust before getting down. The lewd was quite fun, even if I'm shocked (and tbh a little jealous) how well Sandy took everything for his very first time. But what is clop if not a chance for sexy fantasy? Good read, great ship, going in the faves folder.

Fun story, I wonder what is the aftermath with telling everything to Yona a few days down the road.

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Ha, I blocked Late_night long ago for *reeeeeee*ing at me in a Discord for Wrong ShipsTM.

You're in good company!

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Thank you for the feedback! I had a hunch you'd be interested in this story ๐Ÿ‘€
Still got to get around to updating Shooting Star.

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I am planning on a sequel for one of these days!

Sandbar was a needy lil colt to cum without any attention on his cock at all, hot lil gay cheating smut. <3

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