Silent Whisper
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Are the bolded letters, I am guessing your own thoughts, supposed to still be in the story dear? I would expect those to be more in the authors note.
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Great catch, thank you so much!
All the adorableness!
And that last one..... ohhhhh all the sexy kinky fun!
Lovely little piece of Clocktower work.
Bonus points for clarifying that it's consensual non-con in the description.
Thumbs up from me.
Ooo! Excitement to read this!
I'll comment when I do and let you know how it is!
I tend to really like these kinds of Clocktower stories- in fact, I prefer them to the more kinky parts, funny enough.
I really like so much about this, and yay to having a male sub!! (buck that whole gender split, it's so mean when all of the fun stuff and the actual heart are in this clocktower)
One thing I didn't like so much is the ending- didn't come together, it felt rushed. Glossy Print seemed to be feeling too low and insecure, that what happened next- the extra picture and aftercare- felt forced. I could really sympathize with her, and if it had been me I would have needed some alone time away from Photo Finish.
And I was hoping she would realize that she could pursue her own kind of photography but with more natural pictures. Of course it might come up later, but as it is, it feels unfinished.
I still really like this chapter and this charcter, don't get me wrong
Having just played a lot of Dark Souls, the last line of this chapter took me to a significantly darker place than I think it's actually going. Still, for just a moment, I was prepared for this to go entirely off the rails.
The opening of this chapter really doubled down on the momentary gothic horror vibe. Unexpected. Appreciated.
I enjoyed this one--I've enjoyed it all--but you manage to make Finish both very flawed and very sympathetic and that's really great. Print is also just wonderful here.
This was awesome--probably one of my favorite CTS-fics. And that last scene with the Cathedral gosh that was absolutely perfect
Adorable! Thanks for sharing with us.
D’aww, what an adorable chapter! I absolutely love how Photo Finish can get lost in her head and not realize problems until something drastic happens. The way she can go from character to emotional support is so loving, and the way Print looks up to her Mistress as more than just a kinky Master seems to give such a loving connection that assumably reaches outside the Society!
Only you can write something that reaches this level of adorable and loving. <3
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I love the simple detail put into this, you didn't leave it undetailed, but you didn't over explain it. Very nice ^^