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NickyD


Writer, Actor, Singer, Rapper, Aspiring Brony Voice Actor, Artist, Funny Guy, College Student & Aspiring History Teacher. I'm just a guy who wants to make an impact or mark in one way, shape or form.

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Flash Sentry was asked at the last second to house sit for the Apple family. While doing so, he happens to stumble upon a piece of Applejack's property he knows he shouldn't be looking at.

Proofreaders, Pre-readers, and editors: B_25, Bellyrubz, Not Enough Coffee, and MissytheAngle

Non-mature feature: 11/4/17
Popular Box: 11/4/17, 11/5/17

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 19 )
Comment posted by Alex_ deleted Nov 4th, 2017

Read this story in a flash. Totally struck a cord with me. :rainbowwild:

Okay, I still ship Flash with human!Twilight, but if this ends up happening, I'll take it.

I feel kind of dirty for favoriting this, but it's just that good. :fluttershyouch:

This was really sweet and touching, Nick. I really enjoyed it. Good job :twilightsmile:

Although I am a bit disappointed Flash didn't realise his true feelings, for Winona.

Huh, this isn't a ship I see often.

But I can't say I don't like it.

πŸ‘

Great story. I like seeing Flash paired with the other Rainbooms.

I know how both Flash and AJ are feeling. There is so much I shouldn't like about this, but yet, I still do.

It feels out of character for both Flash and AJ, and the pacing is rushed throughout. I want to decry the lack of consequences for Flash's decision and question AJ's sanity in just forgiving someone for it, but his honesty and her feelings keep it just gripping the cliff edge of my tolerance. As for what is keeping this from slipping over the edge...

Honestly, the best parts are the way you wrote Winona. She felt in character while being adorable. It hit all the right feels for everything that is good about having a dog. So for that, you have earned your like.

Nice fic, thanks for letting me pre-read! :twilightsmile:

This was nice. I hate it when people dislike a story simply because Flash Sentry is in it. The dude may not have had a lot of development, but I think his character rules!

Ranch’s number: (645) 874 - 9923

Alright, I have to point this out. This isn't a real area code. Just saying.
Nice story, btw.:twilightblush:

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I know it's not a real area code. Figure I should avoid them for safety reasons

8571174
Yeah, probably a good idea. I just had to point it out. Can you do a sequel to this? I really enjoyed it.:pinkiehappy:

Not bad, but you could afford to make this one chapter for day Flash is house sitting.

I liked this. πŸ‘

What!? No! Of course not! You raised me better than that.

Also Flash:
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First Applejack/Flash story I've ever read. It was engaging. Thanks for the read. :twilightsmile:

This is cute and perfect and I demand a sequel!

Dude. This story deserves a sequel. Take my like and notify us all immediately when you make one!
I have spoken!

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