• Member Since 14th Aug, 2014
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NickyD


Writer, Actor, Singer, Rapper, Aspiring Brony Voice Actor, Artist, Funny Guy, College Student & Aspiring History Teacher. I'm just a guy who wants to make an impact or mark in one way, shape or form.

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Ever since Camp Everfree, Flash has not been feeling well. His life feels empty without Twilight Sparkle. But one day, that all changed, with a piano and a certain rainbow haired athlete.


Inspired by Jay-The-Brony's story: Who would you ship me with?

Proofreaders and editors: Blue Flame, Jack of a Few Trades, FamousLastWords

Popular Box: 6/9/17, 6/10/17, 6/11/17

Featured (Mature Setting Off): 6/9/17, 6/10/17

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 24 )

“Or, Blink - 182, then Green Day.”

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..........ok for a minute there I thought somebody like you would ship him with Derpy... but with Rainbow? O_O :rainbowderp:

Interesting... I've never seen this pairing before.

During pauses of the song Flash would look up from the keys and take quick glances at Rainbow Dash. Something about her seemed different. It was almost if she had this glow or aura that he never saw before. It’s different. A good different.

I'll be honest, I thought she was ponying up.

Is this really featured?
Really?

8222898
yes it is....when you turn off 'view mature.' so technically, it is

I knew it! I always thought Dash and Flash would look good together. But... Soarindash is still my OTP but this ship can be good too.

8222918
I never have "view mature" on because I don't want to read about horses fucking
serious note: do you want me to review this?

8223049
i guess. I mean, if you're up for it

8230013
glad you enjoyed it! Any constructive criticisms?

Not gonna lie, my otp is Soarindash all the way but... I guess I do find Flash and Dash to be kind of cute together... Anyways, great job on the story, not to mentions those references! :derpytongue2:

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Glad you enjoyed the story! any constructive criticisms? And yeah, SOOO many references. Too much maybe

yet feminine voice

uh... Rainbow Dash is not a feminine, sir.. she's a TOMBOY :ajbemused:

By the way, i like it! But, i don't ship Flash and Rainbow, because I'm an AppleDash shipper but it's still nice! *NOT GONNA COMPLAIN* :rainbowlaugh:

8242491
I really appreciate your input! Have any sort of constructive criticisms?

This was cute, heartwarming and delightful to read. Thumbs up. :twilightsmile::scootangel:

“You thought it was funny?” she asked.

Couldn't resist.:twilightsheepish:

Mmm, serious review time.

While I may still have an irrational hatred for Flash Sentry, I did enjoy this story. I'm a real sucker for slice of life romance fics and love music with my slice of life romance. So I guess you could say this story stuck a chord with me.

...I'm sorry. I'm terribly, terribly sorry.

Also, I feel the need to mention this: The narration constantly switches between present tense and past tense. I don't have a problem with either, but the back and forth thing annoys me.

Overall, a pretty good read.

This is totally amazing.I love it.But I think it should be Soarin' instead of Flash
Sentry.Only bad point there.Everything else is totally brilliant.:derpytongue2:😄:trollestia::rainbowlaugh:

You get a like, good sir. :twilightsmile:
A well written Flash Sentry and the Eagles will always be appreciated by me. :pinkiehappy:

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I haven't either. It's an interesting idea. Not sure how I feel about it. I'm not going to say I didn't like the story though.

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