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EquestrianTwist


I'm just a part time writer who enjoys a good story, and wants give those good stories his own patented equestrian twist

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They say in olden times, if two male warriors fought each other in bloody combat, and both managed to survive, the bond of friendship that would be forged between them would be stronger then iron.

Today, this isn't as true as it may have been before, but that doesn't mean guys still don't fight and walk away better people. Flash Sentry, for instance, currently has been having a shitty week. Nothing has been going right for him, and he's beginning to feel like everything is plotting against him. Of course, his friend, Soarin Skies, doesn't initially realize this and maybe says something he shouldn't.

This, as you can guess, is when things get violent...

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Very nice story! Love the pairings and the bonding through fighting shounen feel of it all. I didn't get Soarin's joke at first until I read the end and the way Sunset reacted made it the best part for me.

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Sure, having a long face is an phrase used to describe a person who's wearing an unhappy or disappointed expression. Real world horses traditionally also have elongated faces.

The joke Soarin is making is based on an older, more tired joke, that basically goes like this:

A horse walks into a bar, and the bartender asks: "Why the long face?"

Flash Sentry slammed his way out through the back door of the school into the CHS parking lot with a deep set scowl indentured on his face.

Very nearly stopped reading right there. Don't use words if you don't know what they mean. A scowl cannot be contractually bound to one's face.

Fifteen minutes later,

Yeah no. Soarin is an athlete. Flash is a slacker. That shit wouldn't have gone two full minutes, let alone fifteen.

"You wouldn't understand Dash, it's a guy thing." Soarin explained. "We fight, we punch each other in face, we say some things, we laugh afterwords, then we all go out for beers. It's just men asserting their dominance like nature intended... nothing more, nothing less."

Wow.

What a total load of horse shit.

So uhh...they're just gonna pop off to grab some beers, huh? High school students, just...gonna go grab some beers.

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It's your opinion, dude. I can't exactly take back what I wrote now that it's been published. I'll replace "indentured" with a different word if you like, but besides that... well, your out of luck.

I'm sorry you didn't like the story.

I can't with this :rainbowlaugh: It was hilarious :rainbowlaugh:

Alright this is going in my favorites. This is how, at one point men worked. Now a days, not so much.

Sunflash is easily one of my top three or four mlp ships. Thanks to author for adding to the collection.

What a story. I love it. A sequel would be nice. :rainbowkiss:

Before he could even continue his thought, Sunset suddenly turned to Soarin, grabbed him by the front of his shirt and threw him down hard onto the pavement. She slammed her foot down into the middle of Soarin's chest.

This is why I love Sunset Shimmer

Gut

Enjoyed the story. Guys just needing to take out some frustrations and came out feeling a little better, bruises and all. This story didn't come off try hard or pretentious.

The sunflash and soarindash is a nice added bonus too.

(And yeah so what if they're in highschool and aren't still allowed to drink at their age - like yeah all hs boys never tried drinking at all. Absolutely unrealistic /s. )

Keep doing what you're doing dude.

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Thank you. :raritystarry: That was really nice of you to say. :twilightsmile:

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