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CosmicAlchemist24


As my favorite Entertainment Duelist always says: "The fun....HAS JUST BEGUN!!"

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Ditzy Doo was never a social butterfly, she was always the outcast because of her eye condition. Most people would just looks past her and make fun of her behind her back. She feels that Friendship and love are for idiots. She then meets a carefree young man who might change her life for the better, Flash Sentry.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 19 )

Damn it Rarity! You too Rainbow Ass! :flutterrage: :twilightangry2: :pinkiecrazy: Pinkie... I can't believe you would do that.. :fluttercry: :fluttershbad: :fluttershyouch:

I ship this hard. Gotta read when I'm less drunk, though.

Would have gotten into this story, but then you had to make Rainbow and Pinkie into far cries of their usual selves. I mean, I know kids can be cruel, but this is so out of line for both of them I really can't get into this story, sorry.

8641457
I'm doing this for a reason, i know those two are acting ooc. I wanted it to be that way fir the events to come.

8641476
You see, that's where I take a problem here. Not to be some sort of social justice fanfic warrior, but as soon as you make the characters into far cries of their usual selves without a very good explanation or knowing that they'll get better somewhere down along the line, I have a problem.

Comment posted by KingJoltik deleted Jan 2nd, 2018

Does Sevngallop appear in this story?

Okay, I'm back and sober. I kinda agree with 8641457 here; they just don't seem like themselves.

Also, as for now it's only one chapter, but so far I feel it's kinda standard. Like, nothing outstandingly bad, but nothing particularly gripping either. Let's see how it unfolds in further chapters.

So far I really like this. Don't let people complaining about the OOC Dash, Pinkie and Rarity get to you. I am currently reading a story where they are the bad girls in high school and I love it. Besides, antagonist (bitch) Rainbow is always better in my eyes.


8641457
The story is tagged AU so they're not always going to be protagonists, not everyone portrays the Rainbooms as perfect little angels.

8667235
Thank you for the support and do you mean the story where the Dazzlings are the good girls?

is this going to be continued or is it dead as a doorknob?

Sunset didn’t that last comment.

i think a word is missing from that sentence.

good chapter it left me suspense at the end

Oooo! I want more of this. This is good.

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