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Work In Progress

A couple dozen ideas in development, hoping to get at least a few more actually published


The most wonderful time of the year has returned to Canterlot High once again. The Mane 7 have their work cut out for them this holiday season with school parties, dates and secret santa's gifts. However, things this year may not go as anticipated. From new crushes to reindeer costumes to familiar foes returning in unexpected ways, this is certainly one Christmas time they won't be forgetting anytime soon.

Artwork by kencaldi

Chapters (5)
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Comments ( 16 )

Very nice story!

It was quite enjoyable, a nice balance in conflict and such. Not really anything directly wrong.

Good Job!

Thank you very much
I'm glad you enjoyed it

this was adorable, great job:pinkiehappy:

A wonderfuly told story, I would also love to see more on Flash and Sonata, do you have any plans on writing a story about them?

Thank you
Glad you enjoyed it

Thank you
Glad you enjoyed it
As for more flash and sonata , I'm not sure yet
I'll have to wait and see

Does Abacus Cinch appear in this story?

I feel that you're using exclamation points a bit too much when characters are talking. At one point in this chapter, you had 14 back to back character speaking sentences that all ended in exclamation points. That seems excessive to me.

Other than that, the story's been great so far!!!

Thanks for the advice
I'll fix that next chance I get
and i'm glad you're enjoying the story, hope you like the rest of it
(edit: I've just cut down on some of the explanations on chapter 2/3/4/Epilogue)

I love scearet Santa! I love how u burght ray!!! So cute ! And the fact rarity doesnt own her own store. And the canterlot merriment club is adorable. Cant wait for more!! :pinkiehappy:

Thanks, I’m glad you’re enjoying it

“I’m fined, I’m fined.” Rarity struggled, “you know, it’s a hard word to say!”.

Love the reference!

Comment posted by Work In Progress deleted Feb 2nd, 2018

Thanks for noticing it
I hope you’re enjoying the story

I love apple jack granny smith and apple bloom singing days gone by. It was perfect for them! :ajhappy:

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